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keymex_x

Three Times Too Many

Feb 18, 2010 19:50

Title: Three Times Too Many

Pairing: Seungho/Joon

Genre: I have no idea (VERY SAPPY)

Word Count: 1,330+

Summary: Three times Seungho has seen Joon cry, and all three times he tries to console him.

Warnings: I was too excited to put this up, I didn’t proof read it. AND THERE IS WAY TO MUCH SAP> I THINK I EFFED UP THE ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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mblaq, one shot

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keymex_x February 19 2010, 03:58:02 UTC

SPOT FOR MY SHIMMIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HOLY SHIMMIE MUSHROOMS. kyunho February 19 2010, 04:12:44 UTC

HOLY SHIT MAN. YOU JUST UPGRADED MY OTP FROM HO..GO, TO SEUNGJOON.asdfjkl;asdfjkl; (continues keyboard smashing)

this was just too corny for words ;__;, I love it so much.

"It was the day Joon’s hamster died."
I'm starting to miss Yuki even though I didn't get to see her so much :'( 2010.2.17, Yuki's anniversary.

"Apparently that’s all I’m here for Seungho thought to himself."
shit man, I swear I felt a pang hit my chest when I read this line D: it's so depressing! It's like one of those scenes where you're the best friend (that's been in love) and then you get that one line, "I think I'm in love" and you're scared it won't be you D:

"Curiosity killed the cat, or in this case; Seungho’s heart."
THIS. is forever implanted to mah BRAIN. you are too smarticles, Yoseobie. MOAR GENIUS THEN JUNIE WILL EVER BE.
I think this was the second line that stood out the most to me :'D

"But instead of bringing Joon into a hug as usualwatch out! typo D: but it's okay, I over looked it, LOLOL. TOO MUCH EXCITEMENT TO MAKE TYPOS BRING ME DOWN ( ... )

Re: HOLY SHIMMIE MUSHROOMS. keymex_x February 19 2010, 04:15:52 UTC

I was fixing all the typos while you were reading it haha. I fixed about 5 LOL!!!
I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT!!!!!!
I did good Whew. NO ONE is more genius then Junie Hyung -giggles-
Yay!~ Your comment made me laugh too much.

Re: HOLY SHIMMIE MUSHROOMS. kyunho February 19 2010, 04:18:59 UTC

:D LOL. it's alright, I only caught 1 cause of the excitement.. :D
.. Junie Hyung.. Jun Hyung.. JUNHYUNG. HAHAHA.
really random but what do his dongsaengs call him, 'JunHyung Hyung'?~
:D SO MUCH MBLAQ LOVE.

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keymex_x February 19 2010, 05:29:05 UTC

I browsed over my typos haha. I thank you for the praise considering you are so genius when it comes to writing fics. I idolize you
i'm sorry I made Mir stink haha but it's true

lifeshope_enemy February 19 2010, 04:55:30 UTC

Very Cute.
The ending is better than you think.
Good Job.

keymex_x February 19 2010, 05:30:08 UTC

yay! *pats on back*
I' surprised you didn't fix all my typos :P

lifeshope_enemy February 19 2010, 05:33:42 UTC

I will.
When i sign into your account one day.

keymex_x February 19 2010, 05:40:07 UTC

:D yay. It's hard to find my own typos. >.<"

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