is death the real begining?

Oct 07, 2005 15:56

yo..i got a couple new poems i wanna run by u guys....be truthful..if u like em or not...dun be 2 mean tho..cuz i dun think i can handle really mean ppl rite now..lol ( Read more... )

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Yur bloodsister demonic_punk October 8 2005, 16:20:34 UTC
:o wow you actually posted on here!!! THERE REALLY ARE MIRACLES!!! :D But remember, Jules is MINE!!! ;) The first one I liked better, it was really deep and expressive. I liked the second one, but those are common words that people use now. Try to be more creative, make it more like the first one to REALLY get the message across.

Luv ya,
CM

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Re: Yur bloodsister nymphetamineher October 9 2005, 02:00:24 UTC
*sigh* she can't, you know that.
"I'm just a notch in your bedpost, but you're just a line in a song."-and an overused one at that. Harsh, huh. i'm well aware.

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keytoterror October 11 2005, 23:49:16 UTC
that is SO uncalled for....i can 2 do that.....umm..first...wat is "that"??? o and jules...y r u singing fall out boy?? damn this world is full of question that no 1 will answer 4 me.....

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