You just need SKILL and THECNIQUE

[keyzy_kyumsy]

Title: You just need SKILL and THECNIQUE
Pairing: OnKey // 2min
Genre: not sure(romance??)
Summary: when Jinki do not want to take his medicine.
"Hyung ~ ~ what do you do to Jinki-hyung??" Taemin asked with surprise.
"You wash his brain? Kibum? You did it in just ten minutes, and success? While we? We Persuade him for four days, and failed?” Jonghyun

Comments

[omiichan]

wahahhaha~ damn it, i cant stop smilling reading thisss xDDD this is totally love.. im holding my squeal now xDD

yeah, i already know when i read the summary, the most.. what is it? tempting? way to made someone drink medicine..

really love the way kibum's made entrance, i think hes glowing with his diva aura lol..

and taemin so cute, he even himself didnt drink his vitamin lol.. xD and yes, please minho, use kibum's technique to taemin.. >w<

and jinki, so childish and lucky, god, three medicine? and how much should he drank it every day lol.. im pretty sure he's in love with medicine right now xDD

please write more onkey like this, will wait ^^~

[keyzy_kyumsy]

hahaha, glad to make you smile .. it was warm.
thank you!! X3

I think, although he only need takes the medicine two times a day, Jinki would like to request more doses. hahaha

maybe, Minho will do it, indeed! lol .. hahaha.

really thanks for reading and commenting.
* Hugs *

squeal??!! ha! where? I want to read it !!..* excited *

[keyzy_kyumsy]

haha yes! he daebak!
Kibum is the almighty, so he can do anything!.

I love him too .. yaaaayyy!! XD
thanks for reading and commenting
* Hugs *

btw, I fell in love with your user picture!.^//^

[rinni1905]

This is really cute, dear. You've improved a lot. Omo, Jinki is so in love with his drugs now. Bravo for Kim Key's skills and technique. That's really unique, but it works fastly and efficiently. I really love the ending, Onew and Minho are so adorable semes, right? And I think Taemin wouldn't mind to take the vitamin like that.

As for the fic, I think you did great, and I think you just need to have more idea to write more fic. Your writing is more neatly now, and don't forget to write something more about your character's feeling. And you should sharpen your language a little, write longger sentences and paragraph, not just focusing on dialogue, that way would make your fic appear less childish, more mature and easier to read.

Anyway, you did a very good job, baby, and I can't wait for your next fic.

[keyzy_kyumsy]

eonnieeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~~~~
*runs and jumps at you*

thank you eonnie!!*board smile*

okay! okay!
I'll try it!!
thank you...thank you! for your comment!XD

~ahhh I'm happy~

*HUG*

[tejicious_choi]

wah~ this is crazily awesome =)) i really want a sequel of this one =)) key is super strong to onew, eh? Onew is just so cute~

[keyzy_kyumsy]

awww... yes he is! the Almighty Key..XD
ahhh..really??*big smile*

thanks for reading and commenting...*bows*
*hugs*

[papersanguine]

Hahah i love it!!!

[keyzy_kyumsy]

tee hee hee..XD
glad you like it!!

thanks for reading, and commenting...<3

*hugs*