Forever or Never

[keyzy_kyumsy]

Title: Forever or Never
Pairing: OnKey
Genre: not sure(angst??)
Summary"Tsk! I really hate the deserted place! "Kibum said, making Jinki woke up and looked toward him. "It felt lonely! Look! This tree is a pity is not it? Alone in a place like this?! Alone like that is scary! "

Comments

[rinni1905]

This is really good, baby, and even though the plot is not something new, you're success in deliver the whole story. Key's thoughts and memories with Jinki made me teary, Key must have wanted to live so bad, he couldn't leave Jinki, but then he had to. I just want to hug him here.

I think Jinki had many things that he regreted not doing for Kibum, hurting him and all. The last scene is really touching and I love this line "In this last piece, proudly, I can write that my love is forever". Yeah, Kibum's love for Jinki is forever, and Jinki would treasure it forever too.

This is so sweet, and so sad at the same time. You did great, minus some grammar mistake here and there, that make me a little confused, but I can understand it easily. So don't worry and keep fighting!

[keyzy_kyumsy]

eonniiiiii~~~~
*jumps and hug you*
eonni.... I love you!thank you!X]

ahahah..., the plot just.. because I'm afraid to die, because I'm sick right now.=,=

ahhhh...yes, my English is not good! so still like this.
but, I'll do better later!
thank you sooo much for reading and commenting eonni~.*bows*

ofcourse...their love is forever,,XD

[juphen]

ohh..so heartbreaking
poor jinki but sweet...

[keyzy_kyumsy]

owwwh yes ...
I think, if it happens like that, will hurt, right?

thanks for reading and commenting.X]
* Hug *

[keyzy_kyumsy]

oh dear! thank you!
I love you! really, I mean ... you've read them ~
kyaaaa I'm really happy!
a thousand thanks to you!
* kiss kiss kiss

(btw...so soooooorrryy.. this is very late re i know -_- *stabs my self)

[keyzy_kyumsy]

heeeeee....from youtube?...owaaaa..
I do not know if one will come here through youtube. * tears of joy *

and you watch it too ?~.... thank you very much!

*hugs squeeze you*