The Target [prologue]

Dec 15, 2010 19:24



"Hyung?!" Said Taemin confused when he opened his eyes and didn’t find his hyungs. He only found Jjong and Minho are asleep in their room.
"Minho-hyung! Jjong-hyung! Wake up! "Taemin shook both his hyung. Minho and Jjong like there is glue in their eyes, they don’t want to open their eyes and just frowned.
"Hyung! Wake up! I'm really scared now! " ( Read more... )

pairing, shinee, fanfic, romance, onkey

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melalocket December 15 2010, 17:15:14 UTC
omoo this is interesting!!
and its action!!
love this >.<

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keyzy_kyumsy December 15 2010, 22:25:44 UTC
awwwwww...you're first!! again...hehehe..*SUPPAH dupper HUG*

glad you like it!!...>,<
haha... yup, it's action.....*i'm weird rite?..=,='?*

thx for reading and commenting hon~...
*hug-hugs*

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melalocket December 18 2010, 18:45:31 UTC
lol im fast coz im just stay infront of my laptop all day -_____________-

khekekekekeke..

nah you are not weird (much) khekekekeke >.<

you are welcome *hugs*
but i ha an exam this monday until next week :(
so i cant be fast reader :(
i even cant open LJ ..

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keyzy_kyumsy December 20 2010, 10:40:19 UTC
o...ahahahaha...kkkk

wohaaa...
hwaiting for you exam bb!!!....\\(>,<)//
hwaiting!!^^

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sam_theninja24 December 15 2010, 23:57:31 UTC
OMG
This is like... my favorite type of story
ACTION-ROMANCE XDDD

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keyzy_kyumsy December 16 2010, 22:36:49 UTC
nyahahahaha,,action romance!!action romance!!......kkkkk
It was first for me, so maybe this will be a bit strange action-romance ...kkkk...=,=

glad you like it...^^
thx so much for reading and commenting..XD
*hug*

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unyumunyu December 16 2010, 00:26:16 UTC
cool...
please update soon ^^.

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keyzy_kyumsy December 16 2010, 22:55:20 UTC
wah....thx so much..4 reading and commenting...XD
*hug* ^^

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neneksihir December 16 2010, 03:27:27 UTC
geez...this one so interesting...
I'll wait for next chapter... =)

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keyzy_kyumsy December 16 2010, 22:57:38 UTC
eonnie~~~~~
ahhhhh.. thx so much for come...and commenting....*hUg_hug*..XD

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omiichan December 16 2010, 04:12:49 UTC
ugh.. my comment.. why it must be error after i posted it ;________;

i forgot what i wrote.. its just about 3/4 minutes ago --a

anyway.. i love this genre~~ action.. but not usual action.. idk why im smiling while reading it, it should be serious when ure talking about action xDD

" And and the most unreasonable is _ if I really slept for four days, why I don’t feel hungry!" Said Minho can’t believe it. this remind me when minho said he slept for 2 days after tired playing football xDD

oh, and i remembered i watched the video couple days ago, cant believe u made it into a fic.. cause its interesting.. seeing both onkey wore that black and black clothes..

i like the pic.. i like the plot..
im waiting for 1st chap >w<~~

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keyzy_kyumsy December 16 2010, 23:05:28 UTC
ahhh I also often like that! forgot to write anything, but just think about it a few seconds before!...LOL...
no..it's not that serious though...kkkk

yes! i was thinking about that too(when minho said he ever slept for 2 days)...hahahaha...

anyway....thx soooo much for reading and commenting....XD *hug*

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