The Target _ First Clue [Another Agent]

[keyzy_kyumsy]

Title           : The Target _ First Clue [another Agent]
Author       : keyzy_kyumsy 
Pairings     : OnKey
Ratings     : G
Genre        : Romance, Action*??* (bit fluff)
Summary  : Kibum's eyes can’t  escape  from the gray door which had just slammed. With his enthusiastic grin, he murmured: "hmp, I guess__I’ve found the other Lucifer!" He grined as  stroking

Comments

[neneksihir]

this story grows interesting...
Maybe the story just started,sometimes i still found it linger...
Anyway...update soon bb =))

[keyzy_kyumsy]

kkkk...the story wouldn't linger..i think..=,=
hahaha..

thx eonn~~~ 4 reading and commenting...>,<
*suppah hug*

[melalocket]

its interesting :D

[keyzy_kyumsy]

awww you come!!
thx so much >,<...*hug hug*

btw..
how's ure exam?

[melalocket]

my exam is great thanks khekekekeke :D

hugs you back >.<

tell me if you post the new one kaayyyy??
hehehhee~~

[keyzy_kyumsy]

wooww glad to hear that...xD

errrrmm,, i just posted a new one...but i'm not sure if it's....eeemmm yeah..hahaha..xD

[rinni1905]

Yes, this chap gave me a little headache reading it. I'm not want to criticize you, baby, but try to simple your sentence if you didn't sure how to write. Just make it short and understandable. and it would be much more easier for your beta-reader to edit your fic too. I hope she would reply you soon so that she could help you out more than I did.

I really want to become your beta-reader too, but I'm kind of busy and my English isn't that good. Somehow I still see that you put much effort in writing this chap, even though I can hardly understand it but it seemed interesting. And I can't really wait for the next chap, since the plot is developing slowly.

Fighting with your next chap, don't be sad because it turned out not really in your standard, you tried hard enough. Keep on working with this fic ne?

[keyzy_kyumsy]

sorry eonni~~~~ TT^TT

yes,,,, i think she's as busy as you....*hiks*
*hug*

awwww thx eonni~~ thx so much...
yup..i'll try hard!! fighting!!...kkkk
thx again...*hug* tee-hee-hee...xD