the scenario called destiny

[keyzy_kyumsy]

Title: the scenario called destiny
Pairing: OnKey
Genre: not sure(angst??)
Summary: "Hmph-! You can still smile that little smile of Kim Kibum ?!..." pulled from soft lips, he never felt angry to see Kibum smile before, but back to the fact that Kibum is still able to laugh even after that fight, after he left him, it made him feel like, Kibum did

Comments

[rinni1905]

Uhm... Firstly, I want to say that your first fic is really good. I love the way you write. But I don't think I understand and feel the same pain that Kibum and Jinki were endured in this. Secondly, I know that author owns the fic, so is the content, but when I read this I don't really feel satisfied.

Jinki was too childish, and Kibum was so stubborn. You know, love is like a war, and if Jinki and Kibum loved each other enough to continue to love each other, they would grab any chance to be back with each other again. Both are at fault, and I don't really have the feelings for them, because they were so stupid to blow their last chance to be together. I just feel sympathy for Taemin, Minho and Jonghyun. They would be ones that hurt the most.

I know that my words are really harsh, and I'm really sorry, but you know, there's always second chance in life. People want to be a better person, and never let go of someone they love. And I find logic in that, so I usually strict with angst. Your fic is really good, and I hope you will write

[keyzy_kyumsy]

ahhhhhh...
thank you sooooo much..
i know... because this is my first,,,so...
hehe..
thanks for your comment!!
i just think that onew an key, have other thoughts in their minds, they do not say or show on the outside, or even different from those who look beyond.

you know how much i want to hug you!!...ahhhh
*hugs you*

okay, i'll tray to make it batter next..