Re: infinite, myungsoo/sungyeol, 4-ish
anonymous
November 11 2011, 09:22:37 UTC
holy.... omg anon this is beautiful, the last line is my absolute favorite. this is heartbreaking but, like how you drew out fantastically, like in reality where A does not lead to B, kisses do not necessitate closure and omg i hurt for myungsoo.
Re: infinite, myungsoo/sungyeol, 4-ish
anonymous
November 11 2011, 11:04:06 UTC
\o/ one thing very contrived with fanfic is the whole fact that A will lead to B and that's just how stories are made. nothing is random in fiction. real life is never like that and i wanted to explore it, so thank you so much for this review ahhhh ♥♥
Re: infinite, myungsoo/sungyeol, 4-ish
anonymous
November 11 2011, 14:17:49 UTC
Ahhhh anon. This is beautiful! I love the way you describe the both of them, and the moments that could mean something but mostly just happen and don't mean anything in particular (not to say they mean nothing, though). This really is amazing :)
one thing that bothered me though: ammonia is basic. It's not an acid ._. /biochem major
kind of gtop; warnings for daul's suicide
anonymous
November 11 2011, 09:11:45 UTC
Seunghyun can remember the day Jiyong started smoking again, vivid as a film reel playing in the dark room of his skull. It was raining like it would never stop, an autumn evening, slicking all the streets with a continuous sheet of rainwater, reflecting yellow headlights and pale blue advertising boards onto the angular slope of Jiyong's cheek as he took the highway into Hongdae. He was in one of those jagged-glass moods, angry and reclusive and volatile, all at once. They hit a red light and Jiyong banged a hard fist against the dashboard. He turned too hard and swore at the rain, swore at the pedestrians and other drivers and Seunghyun. He couldn't pick a club for the night, spending less than an hour in each one before storming out again. Seunghyun hadn't wanted to go out that night, but Jiyong told him to get dressed or he would never talk to him again. So he got dressed
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Re: kind of gtop; warnings for daul's suicide
anonymous
November 11 2011, 17:23:52 UTC
i really, really liked this anon. i do think gd parties hard to deal with stuff like this and stress and tension. and it makes complete sense that he would take top along and top would go even if he didn't want to.
and i loved this line - "He was in one of those jagged-glass moods, angry and reclusive and volatile, all at once."
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this is really really great, anon ♥
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one thing that bothered me though: ammonia is basic. It's not an acid ._. /biochem major
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and i loved this line - "He was in one of those jagged-glass moods, angry and reclusive and volatile, all at once."
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