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My H/D Career Fair fic: The Tapestry of Kinship, Part 2 of 2

Nov 09, 2014 14:47

For anyone who is reading this as posted in my journal, rather than on AO3 (where it's complete), here is part 2 of The Tapestry of Kinship. Start here for part 1.

Title: The Tapestry of Kinship
Author: khalulu
Prompt: # 199
Rating: PG-13 (a little non-explicit sex)
Career Choices: Harry: unemployed ?budding artist?; Draco: single father, ( Read more... )

Comments 2

phonixfeder November 16 2014, 20:51:42 UTC

Hi, I really love this story.

It is quiet, but very touching. It is slow , but yet so powerful. Altogether.

The relationship between Harry and Draco and the interaction with Mira is touching and made me cry, but also made me smiling.

It was nice that Draco had a daughter. Sometimes it's boring when Scorpius is his son . It is refreshingly different that Mira is his child. Loved this detail. Well done :)

I also liked the characterization of Harry. A little bit sad, a little bit melancholic, almost a little bit depressed, but there is still Harry's strength.

But most of all I liked Draco. He was so grown-up, so cordially. I think it was Mira. She has made him so balanced.

And as always in your stories: Luna had such a shining appearance.

Thank you for this story! I would love to translate this story and I think that your fans in germany will be very happy, that there is a new story from you!

Best regards, Sonja .

khalulu November 16 2014, 22:18:41 UTC

Oh, thank you so much, Sonja. You always leave the kindest and most perceptive comments. Yes, I think caring for Mira has made Draco grow up and given him another chance at being a loving person, and having someone trust and love him in return. And being with them has pulled Harry out of his melancholy too.

I would love for you to translate this story - I deeply appreciate your support and generosity in making my stories available for German readers, and I love to read their comments and your responses too. I know that you have so many projects that you may not get to it for a while, but I will look forward to it! (I wonder what German phrases I will learn this time!)