Here's the next part of my Swan Queen series. :)

[khase_fan09]

Title: Dark That Follows
Fandom: Once Upon a Time
Pairing: Emma/Regina (Remma or Swan Queen, if you will)
Rating: It's pretty tame (I think there's ONE curse word, maybe), so I'll say E for Everyone :)
Summary: If this is what being in love feels like, Emma Swan wants absolutely nothing to do with it.
Disclaimer: I don't own a thing. No infringement

Comments

[futuremd2022]

Please fix it...

You convey the emotions so well that it makes it all seem so real...I just don't know what to say..I think I'll go read it again, it was beautiful in all its angsty glory....

[khase_fan09]

Aww, I'll fix it, I promise. I don't like making people sad. :(

But I'm really glad you're enjoying it anyway, despite the heavy angst. It'll get better soon. :)

[nadezhdast]

Yay! A new part of the series! I'm not happy that Emma is sad, but I'm happy I found this here when I checked your website this morning (one of the first things I do now after I found it). I can so identify with what Emma's going through at the moment that it hurts inside, but it's so beautifully written I still enjoy reading it. And so true, this is exactly how someone feels in this kind of situation! You've done a great job! Now I'd love to read about Regina's side of things and maybe have someone knock some sense into either of them, so they can resolve this. I don't want it to happen too fast, it'll obviously take some time before anything can be ok, but I do hope you're not planning on keeping them separated forever. You're not, right?

[khase_fan09]

I'm definitely not planning to keep them separated for very much longer. I promise. That would kill me too. LOL. Also, the next chapter, I believe, is what I have planned to show Regina's side of things, so I hope you'll enjoy that once I get it up here. :) Thank you so much for reading and for commenting. I'm glad I seem to be doing the characters and emotions justice and I'm so happy you're enjoying the series. :)

[nadezhdast]

I would most definitely enjoy the next chapter with Regina's point of view once you get it up here. There's no if about it. I've enjoyed everything you've written so far and I'm betting on that trend continuing in the future. And when I say enjoy I mean really, really love. :) So if I haven't said it already - thank you so much for providing food for my obsession with these two ladies!

[khase_fan09]

Aww, thank YOU, lovely, for being so sweet. ^-^

[geekgrrllurking]

Urgh! So damn good!! I half hoped Ruby would slip something alcoholic into Emma's cocoa, lol! Looking forward to the next part. Come on Regina, quit running scared. Come on Emma, don't give up without a fight. Come on Mary Margaret, give your daughter a pep talk about true love conquers all. Ok, off to go get some cocoa ;)

[khase_fan09]

Haha! Ruby would so be the one to do something like that to Emma. I'm looking forward to getting past the angst. It even hurts me as the writer. LOL. It'll get better soon though. Thanks for reading and for the lovely comments. :)

[radak]

you wrote angst beautifully. amazing part.

[khase_fan09]

Thank you. :)