*Die for love*

[khole2233]

i sit in the park where i dwell for this boy i love so well he took my heart away from me now me wants to set me free i see a girl on his lap he says things to her he never said to me i ran home to cry on my bed not a word to mom was sed dad came home late that night he looked at me from left to right he saw me hanging from a rope he took his knife

Comments

[silleeroxygirle]

:(

[phychugirl]

The grammar and spelling was horrifying. Almost as much as the poem itself. Good job doing the poem justice, Krys.

[sweetlilchey]

ya...i am still mad at you tho..because you told me that you and eric were going out and that made me mad because you didnt tell me and i was your friend! and then you tell me that you were joking...i dont call that joking i call that lying! especially when we were your friends and we put up with all the shit you do to us and all the lies you tell people like your age!?! ya i dont know what to tell ya...i will talk to you at lunch..but right now i am mad at you!

[dojima]

Why is this so hard?  You click the "Reply to this" button ONLY to people you want to reply to on the comment list.  The number of people that I see misuse it is astounding...I'll not admonish you again...

[khole2233]

shut up