greyxx

[starchoir]

Present for greyxx
Type of Present Fanfiction (one-shot)
Title Slumber
Characters/Pairings 6927 (Rokudo Mukuro/Sawada Tsunayoshi)
Word Count 3.519
Rating PG-13 Genre Comfort/Romance/Waffy
Warning Mentions character death, but nothing depressing, I swear!

Note to greyxx : Sorry I'm late, dearest! My family has strict rules about using a computer during "Family Time

Comments

[pollinia]

Oooh, this feels so dreamlike. It's horrible and mesmerizing at the same time, and the interplay between Tsuna and Mukuro and the dream is really haunting. Well done! ♥

[starchoir]

Haha, thanks! I started to write this fic before reading about the {spoiler}fact TYL!Tsunayoshi is not dead, wut{spoiler}, hence the whole haunting-angsty thing. I tried to fix it, but it didn't fell right, so it ended up like that, LOL. I'm glad you liked it!

[greyxx]

woah.
o__________o
....o_____________o
*Still in shock*
I mean it was so powerful, the use of words and everything
you are a really really good writer, I really loved it <3
and they were so in character!! How Tsuna had resigned to the idea of watching the whole scene, and Mukuro who still wants to possess him, yet he takes his place as Tsuna's guardian :3
And the whole feeling about it, beautiful. How you managed to picture the whole situation without making it angst or depressing
Loved how you described 25 years old Tsuna and what Mukuro said “I will definitely wait for you to become like that before I possess your body, Vongola” x3
you are a fan of allx27? *---* it just can't be helped, reborn! is like a reverse harem for me xDD and definitely 6927 is on my top 3 pairings <3
and don't worry about it, my family is the same *specially my mom xD*, I wasn't even here (At home xD) the 25th and I just came back yesterday, so for me it wasn't delayed xDD
hope you had a great time with your family <3
and thank you!! it totally made my day :

[starchoir]

Thank you very much! ♥ This is my second attempt to write REBORN! fanfiction, the first after I hopelessly fell in love with Mukuro, so, I wanted to do it right (especially because English is not my language and it's hard to find beta-readers, not to mention this is a Christmas gift, ne). Thank God someone liked it xD (I hope greyxx will like it, too).

And the characters, oh~, Mukuro is the hardest one @___@. He looks like a rainbow, seriously, I have no idea what he is thinking as he hardly show or voice his feelings. I tried to keep him in character, but the gentleness towards the end might have spoiled everything 8D. TYL!Tsuna was a little difficult, too; we lack information about him. But the whole time-traveling plan was his idea, so I think he became a cunning and human version of Reborn, huhuhu

[greyxx]

"(I hope greyxx will like it, too)"
uuh... o.o I'm greyxx xDDDD
hahaha anyway, yeah you can't really know how Mukuro is because he's always different... that's part of his charm I guess xD I think it is in character, because Mukuro does do some gentle things every now and then :3
I don't know how TYL!Tsuna is, but I don't see him being a sadist mafioso like reborn xDD but he is as powerful as him (at least that's what Hibari says) so you get a Tuna version of a mafia boss <3
OMG!!! 6927 1827 and 5927 are precisely my top 3!! hahaha I started liking 1827 because in the all27 fics their scenes are always soo smexy xDDD the 5927 is just too obvious, at least on Gokudera's side xDD (it was the first pairing I liked in the series owo) and 6927 is pretty obvious too, with the whole body-possession thing xDD
It was fun, we did some things non-typical for christmas eve, but I had a great time too :)

[starchoir]

*star fails xD* NE, I WAS SLEEPY WHEN I WROTE THAT AND DIDN'T SEE YOUR NICK *kicks herself* Sorry ._.

BUT ANYWAY. (LOL). I'm sooooo glad you liked it, I was biting my nails in fear you wouldn't! And our situation - concerning the pairings we like - is the same, haha; I started loving the bittersweet 5927, then 1827 (I still think it's a bit strange, at least when I read the manga and see Hibari being, err, himself. But STILL. Can't help myself xD), and finally Mukuro possessed my heart and all that jazz =D

About Tsuna-the-boss, maybe he won't become bizarre like Reborn, but they were together for a long time 8D

(I'll shut up now, because I'll start babbling if I don't, but: I wish you happiness and all good things in the world!!!)

[questofdreams]

This was really interesting. Loved the dream sequence and Mukuro taking Tsuna away from it <3

[erisabesu]

I love the perspective you have here, and the play between the expected and the unexpected. <3 This line: "...only I have the right to distress you." is SO Mukuro. *gleeful*