Bridges

Mar 30, 2014 02:41

Love is throwing a grappling hook across a deep dark abyss. Love is building an unsteady bridge from one precarious ledge to another. Love is lining up two solid walls, and hoping they fit together.
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elledanger March 30 2014, 19:00:04 UTC
Awww this is really sweet - I really like the metaphor at play here.

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kianna_leigh March 31 2014, 00:07:35 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. I was hoping it came off "sweet" instead of "cynical". Really I was thinking it could swing either way.

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kehlen March 30 2014, 19:33:48 UTC
Lovely imagery.

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kianna_leigh March 31 2014, 00:07:56 UTC
Glad you liked it.

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i_will_not_say March 30 2014, 19:48:12 UTC
This was a really sweet metaphor!

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kianna_leigh March 31 2014, 00:08:43 UTC
Glad you thought it was sweet. I wondered if it was going to come off sweet.

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i_love_freddie March 30 2014, 20:16:40 UTC
Beautiful use of imagery.

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kianna_leigh March 31 2014, 00:09:50 UTC
Beautiful? Really? OMG. I'm happy now.

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penpusher March 30 2014, 20:51:09 UTC
Strong poetic elements happening here, and a truth I think we do tend to conveniently overlook. A lovely take!

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kianna_leigh March 31 2014, 00:11:36 UTC
That's me. Truth telling poet extraordinar. Thanks for reading.

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