one of my essays for smittcamp. please critique!!!

Dec 20, 2006 13:42

VIII. Narrative Statement ( Read more... )

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jedi_padawan December 20 2006, 22:31:01 UTC
Jenna, that is beautiful. I love it. I'm moved to tears. I'll critique it with a close eye soon when I don't have to clean the kitchen. I love you so much hon.

Love always,
Debbie

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egb_chan December 21 2006, 23:10:26 UTC
you have nice music taste ;)

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iluvnerds6165 December 22 2006, 00:30:27 UTC
like it a LOT, and boy can I relate. I wrote something similar in a school interview about religion, and a big part of it was how I had a false sense of identity until my parents divorced and thats when I came into my own, real self...entirely on my own. Sometimes it takes rough things like family falling into cracks to finally see your real self more clearly.

Anyways, it's good!

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