Snapped [new one-shot]

[kidsnurse]

Title:  Snapped

Genre:  Angst

Rating:  PG

Characters:  House, Wilson, Cuddy

WordCount:  2175

Spoilers:  4.15/4.16; House’s Head/Wilson’s Heart

Summary:  Tag for episode 4.16: Wilson’s Heart.  He felt when it broke, an actual physical sensation.
A/N:  Did you know that blackmare_9  is brilliant?  Her suggestions always and magically make my

Comments

[angelcat2865]

Beautifully done! The way you caught House's pain is so eloquent. I could truly feel House's heart breaking through your words.

[kidsnurse]

then i accomplished my goal with this piece; thanks!

[chaoskir]

Oh sad and moving and poor, poor House. I do love your fic. House's thoughts are so moving. And Wilson, urrgh, yeah I know he is ... Urrgh, well, he is Wilson. Poor House again. And Cuddy tried to let him feel better but failed. Wow! You are really a great author.

[kidsnurse]

thanks, dear. i feel sorry for cuddy; she does try so hard, and has such a good heart.

[kidsnurse]

o realistically and so honestly without, you know, being the characters

i suppose you could call me a 'method writer.' i do tend to take on the emotions i'm writing about [which sometimes makes for an interesting homelife!], or i write about whatever my actual overriding emotion happens to be. for example, with this piece, i'd been feeling isolated, kind of lost. i started writing, and Snapped was the result.

thanks so much for commenting; glad you enjoyed it.

[menolly_au]

This is just heartbreaking... this is what the show missed out on by skipping those 2 months. Poor House...Just a perfect story.

[kidsnurse]

thank you; i often feel a need to 'fill in the blanks' where the show is concerned, and it pleases me so much when i'm able to share the results of that need, and know that other people find it satisfying as well.

[bonomania]

'His heart hurts'...now mine does :(

You really know how to make me cry for House...and feel disappointed in Wilson - even though I shouldn't. 0_o

Thanks for sharing. Love it. x

[kidsnurse]

you're quite welcome! i'm too protective of house sometimes; wilson's only human, and i believe he tries to do his best for house, but occasionally i just have to jump in and clarify things from house's perspective! :)

[mickey_p]

Wilson's only human, yes...but tonight's ep shows he does CARE.