Porn Star (4/10?) boomtrack @ kiiteruno JaeMin, YunJae, BFF!YooMin; NC-17, AU Porn-Star!verse; ~5,000 words Warnings: Strong language, sex, the usual for me. A porn star and his fanboy.
Holy shit. Saving a comment spot while I flail over the fact that this was on my friends list. Will definitely be back to comment!! (I was just thinking about this fic like, yesterday, seriously!!)
Oh man. This chapter has totally rekindled the absolute love that I have of this story. There's just so many things that work! Changmin's characterization is love. Jaejoong is adorable and I love him. Yoochun is sleazy in all the right ways. It's wonderful~
And, btw, not that you won't hear this a thousand and one times, that scene with them on the couch? One of the hottest things I've ever had the pleasure to read. Wow.
I'll definitely be sticking with this fic. I don't even care how long it takes to get finished. (That's a lie, I want more! But I'm not going anywhere!)
XDDDD I'm so, so, so excited that you enjoyed this chapter, really. I'm really proud of how it came out and to know other people enjoyed it as much as I enjoy it makes me feel just, really really pleased :D
And, btw, not that you won't hear this a thousand and one times, that scene with them on the couch? One of the hottest things I've ever had the pleasure to read. Wow. I have not written such a long, drawn-out, involved... well, I can't call it a sex scene, can I? XDDD make-out scene? XDDD whatever. I haven't written one this long and involved and... intense pretty much ever. :3 So I'm glad it worked. :D!
I'll try not to let two months go by before I update again. XDD;;
Girl, you're one of my favorite writers on here. That's the truth. I love it when I stumble onto fics that turn out to be great, and yours are always great. (Man, I should comment more often.)
Whatever you want to call it, it was pure brilliance. Scenes like that can be so awkwardly written -- more often than not, I'm afraid -- but yours are so damn natural. Maybe that's what makes it so great to read. Or maybe it's just that I love your characterization (did I say that already? lmao).
I hope it doesn't take two months!! -^.^- No pressure though! Do your best!
oh my god I kind of love you right now. ♥♥♥ I love this - I love how yoochun is all GETS-CHANGMIN-DRUNK but still all concerned!hyung (&hearts @ "When're you gonna let me meet him?" he murmurs softly, sliding fingers through Changmin's hair), and how jaejoong litters his text messages with ♥s, and how changmin is so head over heels when it comes to jaejoong aldkajf. basically everything, it is so cute, and incoherency is my middle name. :3
@ the YooMin: It's one of those situations where Yoochun feels like he's the only one allowed to abuse Changmin XD He may get him drunk and tease him and be evil to him but if anyone else tries anything like that they'll have a very angry hyung!Yoochun on their hands :3
I recall from interviews and the other members talking about Jaejoong that he texts a lot, very fast, and uses loads of emoticons. XDDD So that's why he does the same here.
SO PROUD OF YOU FOR GETTING THIS CHAPTER OUT. :DDDDD
I really love this chapter--it's so fun to see their relationship growing. :) And ahhhhh, have I mentioned how that sexy scene is hot? BECAUSE IT IS. Unfff he totally came in his underwear. :D
Sleeping in is really important and I'm glad you acknowledged that~
(PS I like how you changed that one line--I think that works a lot better!)
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NIPPLE PIERCING SAGSDAHDHNFMJGFNHFDN I FUCKING LOVE YOU.
boy needs to put that thing back in.
also, i think i want to steal your yoochun and keep him tied up in my basement (which, incidentally happens to be my entire apartment).
dshdjhdj that was sexy. <3
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/AGREES :|
LMAO gosh everyone wants Yoochun XDDDD; ♥
I'm glad you thought it was sexy, thank you :DDD
And I think your icon is gorgeous. :D!
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AND IT'S AMAZING IN CASE YOU DIDN'T GET THAT YET.
Still, DRUNKKKKK!Min is <3 and DLFGHLSJFDKGHDLF CUDDLING
AND I WANT THAT ANATOMY TEXT BOOK GDI.
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And, btw, not that you won't hear this a thousand and one times, that scene with them on the couch? One of the hottest things I've ever had the pleasure to read. Wow.
I'll definitely be sticking with this fic. I don't even care how long it takes to get finished. (That's a lie, I want more! But I'm not going anywhere!)
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And, btw, not that you won't hear this a thousand and one times, that scene with them on the couch? One of the hottest things I've ever had the pleasure to read. Wow.
I have not written such a long, drawn-out, involved... well, I can't call it a sex scene, can I? XDDD make-out scene? XDDD whatever. I haven't written one this long and involved and... intense pretty much ever. :3 So I'm glad it worked. :D!
I'll try not to let two months go by before I update again. XDD;;
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Whatever you want to call it, it was pure brilliance. Scenes like that can be so awkwardly written -- more often than not, I'm afraid -- but yours are so damn natural. Maybe that's what makes it so great to read. Or maybe it's just that I love your characterization (did I say that already? lmao).
I hope it doesn't take two months!! -^.^- No pressure though! Do your best!
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@ the YooMin: It's one of those situations where Yoochun feels like he's the only one allowed to abuse Changmin XD He may get him drunk and tease him and be evil to him but if anyone else tries anything like that they'll have a very angry hyung!Yoochun on their hands :3
I recall from interviews and the other members talking about Jaejoong that he texts a lot, very fast, and uses loads of emoticons. XDDD So that's why he does the same here.
Changmin is so screwed, really. XDDD
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I really love this chapter--it's so fun to see their relationship growing. :) And ahhhhh, have I mentioned how that sexy scene is hot? BECAUSE IT IS. Unfff he totally came in his underwear. :D
Sleeping in is really important and I'm glad you acknowledged that~
(PS I like how you changed that one line--I think that works a lot better!)
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Sob I have to wonder if we wouldn't all come in our underwear if we had Jaejoong rubbing up on us XDDDD
Ah yeah I think that one line is better this way too actually XDDD Makes it clear how much Changmin's had by then and thus why he's so far gone XDDD
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