Now you can see me(KaiXUruha, oneshot)

[kikai_no_yume]

Title: Now you can see me
Author: Mizuki
Chapter: Oneshot
Theme: III.07 Valence/drapes
Claim: Kai x Uruha(Gazette)
Pairing(s): Kai x Uruha(onesided)
Genre: Angst, deathfic, Rape, Murder
Ratings: R
Warnings: Character death, Rape, Murder
Disclaimer: The story is mine but all fiction, and I don't own the Gazette...
Notes: Written for the challenge comm

Comments

[vanilla_rousse]

Hey:)
Very nice written, I like it:)
~Good job!~
greetings:)

[kikai_no_yume]

Thank you! ^^
I'm glad you like it =3
m(__)m

[hitsu711]

so wrong O_O... yet so right..*_*

[kikai_no_yume]

well, I take it that's a good thing~^^
I'm glad you liked it=3 (And seen as this was the first time I wrote something...dark like this, and everyone(most) liked it, I'll probably be writing more stuff like this in the future~! ^^)
Thanks for your comment! m(__)m

[sihat]

my heart is thumping really fast for lke 5 minutes after readin this..?

phew.. nice ff.. but i felt sad dat uru ended up lke dat.. really harsh.. n hw cruel kai can be XDDDD

nice anyway ~.~

[kikai_no_yume]

wow thanks!^^ It's nice to know that it could have such an effect on people^^;

Thanks for your comment! m(__)m

[nashi_kanata]

kai.killed.uruha.

XD... I always thought he'd do that with a pistol! lolz

getting back to the fic...

;_________________________________;

NOOOO!!! URU!!

x3 but I do admit that it was interesting to see a psychotic Kai... -shudders- although.... I also admit that I don't want to see it again. ~O~

But, in this ficcie... I don't think that Kai was truly in love with Uruha.... how he could even dare to think (and actually do it) about killing the man he "loved". Maybe, he did love him... only, it turned into obsession or something. XP

but, yeah~ it was good... O_o.. in a freaky, psychotic sort of way

[kikai_no_yume]

yes, yes he did!XDD

Really? I was actually planning on trying to get my Kai muse go dark like this for a little bit, somewhere in the futureXD

Have you ever been madly and love with the person you are with, and then they just decide to end it all?
It hurts, incredibly, and then you start to hate, loathe them to no end. And all you'd want to do is to hurt them in excactly the same way as they hurt you. Ignore their presence, or just bitchslap them for what they did to you or whatever way you know to hurt them.
Because even beneath that hate, you still love them and you're still hurt, and you actually just hate the fact that they still hold so much control over you and your feelings.
With Kai it got to the point where, if he couldn't have Uruha, noone would.

I'm glad you liked it anyway^^

[nashi_kanata]

XD... as long as it's not Uruha's going to kill then I'm A-Ok with the dark Kai~

-gets shot- I think I've experienced that... only, I'm the one who decided to end it all. ^^;; it wasn't going to end well anyways. And it was pointless to let him have the illusion that it will get better. XDDDD... ok, enough talk of my failed love life~ haha... but I do see your point now. :< there are so many kinds of love in this world... some good... and some destructive...

xD... I'm sort of the kind of person that loves reading about non-happy endings. ^^;; though, happy endings have their own moments with me

[nadzingers]

i'm in complete shock... wow... i can't move... dark kai... i... i... i...

[kikai_no_yume]

roflXD
Yeah, beneath that innocent barrier he keeps up, we all know he has a dark dominative side too >D
(I mean, come on. You have to be dominative to be the leader of the band and keep all those dorks under controlXD)

[nadzingers]

-nods in agreement- so true!! i so want to see that side of kai!!