Mind Games

[kikamontanez]

Mind Games

Author's note: Wow. My first Psych fic. Hope you guys enjoy!

Details were flooding through Shawn, sticking to his memory and senses like glue. Dark, cold room-most likely bedroom. Queen-sized bed, no comforter, only sheets. Unfolded, possibly dirty laundry scattered around the floor. Wadded up paper littering the laundry...

"I'm glad you'

Comments

Wow...

[mariska_lee]

...very interesting! Creepy, but in a good story way. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Re: Wow...

[kikamontanez]

I meant for it to be creepy. I hope Rick makes you so creeped out you throw up. Not really, but you get the point. Thanks for the review!

Re: Wow...

[mariska_lee]

Rick was definitely creepy - and so was the bit with the syringe. I thought that was going to be a bluff, so I was really surprised when Shawn started feeling sick from it. Scary twist!

[slashylassy]

Hi, you may want to update your summary on LJ to mention non-con, rape, and that it is a work in progress.
I know that I would not have read this if you had. Nothing wrong with your writing style or characters, just my preferences.

[kikamontanez]

Done. I don't how I forgot to do that :(
Sorry about that.

[kikamontanez]

Done :)
Thanks for reminding me.

[noxin]

Mmm... Shawn whump. :3 Also, I rather like your writing style-- I find it difficult to write creepy people/situations for some reason. Haha.

You handled it exceedingly well. :]

[kikamontanez]

Thanks :)

[count_to_eight]

Ooh, a very engaging start! I'm definitely interested enough to keep reading.

[kikamontanez]

Awesome :) Thanks!

[identity99]

Oh, yeah, you seriously need to update your stuff to say it includes non con. I have no problem with it but it seriously disturbs some readers ^^'

But besides that, I like it! I am a big fan of the obsessive!stalker!fan type, and the psychic thing is an excellent twist. Can't wait to read more.

[kikamontanez]

Thanks! More will be up soon!