The Places You'll Go: Part 3

Jul 05, 2010 00:11


The Places You'll Go: Part 3

"Daddy! Daddy!" Little Noah toddled into his father's workshop, screeching and in tears. He threw himself on the floor and began kicking and screaming.

"What is it, Noah?" Gabriel asked calmly, carefully examining a watch through his work glasses.

Peter soon followed behind, and leaned against the doorframe of the open ( Read more... )

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flavouredice July 12 2010, 00:51:53 UTC
Oh crap, no! Awww man... Just when it was getting good and you leave a cliffhanger... I love this story, btw. The writing and the plot... not to mention the slash *waggles eyesbrow*-- Gah! I just hope Peter can fix whatever has happened to Gabriel... Poor Noah. *sad face, bb, SAD FACE*

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kikamontanez July 16 2010, 22:07:54 UTC
Thank you! Part 4 is up now :)

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xenasoul July 12 2010, 06:48:35 UTC
Wow Sylar is back! I missed him! :)
Great fic, hon!

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kikamontanez July 16 2010, 22:08:29 UTC
Yes, isn't it funny how when Sylar turns good we wish he were bad again? Just a little? hahahaha. Thanks for the review! Part 4 is up now!

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jaunt2marz July 13 2010, 17:53:26 UTC
Sylar :) Your back! *hugs* I normally don't like, at all, fics that have Gabriel & Sylar two different personalties; it just bugs me.

You are an exception because I FELL IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! I love the characterization in everything and the storyline is amazing :D!

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kikamontanez July 16 2010, 22:08:54 UTC
Thank you so much! This is one of the best reviews I've gotten :)
Part 4 is up, by the way.

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adrian_chan July 15 2010, 03:00:05 UTC
I miss evil!Sylar. I realized this watching season 1 the other day. Reading this made me realize it even more.

TT.TT

But I love your story! And I do love good!Sylar (just not as much as bad!Sylar!)

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kikamontanez July 16 2010, 22:09:13 UTC
Yes, bad Sylar is just so amusing and fun. Part 4 is up, by the way. Thanks for the review!

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kikamontanez July 16 2010, 22:09:31 UTC
Thank you! Part 4 is up now!

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