first love

[kikega]

the night before, i was rereading the translation to [First Love] by hikaru utada. i've loved the lyrics since i first read them. it always made me so sad, that a story would always play in my mind

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[shirokuro]

Aww, it's sad, but I like it!

>>>“The be with me forever. But you have to do me a favor. No more smoking. You’ll kill yourself.”<<<

then~ XD;;

>>>He was quit after that.<<<
That sentence sounds weird to me. @.@

First Love's an awesome song~ XD

[kikega]

i wish i was able to put things together better :o i didn't like the way i had written those lines either. sounded really strange o_o

but thanks for reading it :D

it is an awesome song!! makes me all emo tho ;_;

[_animalcrackers]

AWWWWWWWW.

<3 :D

[kikega]

^o^!!

[ka1ch4n]

:D ai-san writes good stories~

<3

[kikega]

hehe thank you kai-chan ;p

nothing realy

[ylrac_yanej]

i just love that one song that Hikaru Utada sings. you know the one for Disney. Anywho. you should let me read some of the stuff you write. i feel the same way about writing. i don't really tell anyone that i do it though. i also throw them away cause i hate them.

Re: nothing realy

[kikega]

"simple and clean" is the english version. "hikari" is the japanese :p you can download it online somewhere i'm sure XD if you really want it. haha.

well, i haven't written much other stuff ;p &i'm too shy. i've only shown my other stuff to like...two other people :x

[miakal]

I had to play "First Love" while reading this. It's lovely and really good. ^_^

You should really think about writing more stories. =)

(Now that I've finally read this story, you better keep up your end of the bargain and call me. =P)

[kikega]

OMG AFTER 30 YEARS YOU FINALLY READ IT XP

haha but thanks :D
i have one story that's been on-going for awhile. but i think it's not too good XD oh well. :p

&of course XD i'll call you ALL THE TIME NOW XP
you'll get sick of it and wish you never read my story XD

[miakal]

Didn't take that long. :P And I had to find it too you know.

lol...I would never get sick of you calling...if you ever do that is. :P But I am glad I read your story. It was good. Write more. ^_^

[kikega]

took almost that long!! XP &it was hidden that bad XD

i was gonna call you yesterday actually :X but jenni had called and yeah. haha.