Yet another version

Sep 23, 2007 01:26

Magic

Adorned by life's purest fabric
Surrounded by sweet sounds and lights
I came in this world of Magic
All things so warm, intense and bright.

In search of all Magic secrets
I tasted the forbidden fruit.
My sudden haste to interpret
Had brought me fears I had to mute.

I learned to be so pragmatic
But never saw what was the price.
The Magic gone, simple ( Read more... )

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kildoo_lonewolf September 30 2007, 16:27:02 UTC
Thank you kindly.

I wrote it in English. It is the way I found to improve my English and to be able to express myself at the same time.

I am slowly changing my thought patterns when I am writing (or speaking) in English but I must admit that most of my syntax is still very much French. I just hope that people can still grasp what I am trying to express.

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