Into The Night

Apr 17, 2013 03:14

Title: Into The Night
Pairing Bill/Tom Kaulitz, Tokio Hotel
Rating: R
Summary: Love. The word’s heavy on your tongue but heavier on your heart. Turning your head, you cast your eyes at Tom. He loses all his cockiness in sleep, so open, looking as vulnerable as he makes you feel. Does he understand what goes through your mind every time he looks at ( Read more... )

twincest, tokio hotel, bill kaulitz, tom kaulitz

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steinsgrrl April 17 2013, 23:07:45 UTC
Gorgeously written. The tension is wonderful and I really enjoyed your style. Thanks for linking this on th_fanfic!

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killeleanor April 19 2013, 20:09:04 UTC
Thank you!! :D My pleasure.

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strssna April 17 2013, 23:45:27 UTC
Ah, that was absolutely beautiful. The use of words was gorgeous. Congratulations on the first - no wonder you got one :)

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killeleanor April 19 2013, 20:09:22 UTC
Thank you so much; I really appreciate it. :)

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eilonwe2 April 18 2013, 07:48:44 UTC
Very visual and an interesting POV that's not often used. I know how difficult that had to be to write and remain in the proper tense/narrative. Well done.

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killeleanor April 19 2013, 20:09:52 UTC
Thanks. I'm glad it worked. :)

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