Lawn Flamingo

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This is a poem I wrote for poetry class. Jenni has already read it, of course:

Lawn FlamingoAll day on one wobbly pink leg he stands

Comments

[xx_kitty_kat_xx]

I read the title and immediately thought of the Sims. There's something seriously wrong with me.

I like your poem though :)

[kilobites]

Nah, there's nothing wrong with you! I like making my characters kick the lawn flamingos because I'm a horrible person. Thanks!

[craziness295]

Of course!

[kilobites]

Well duh =)

[soggybrowncoat]

Oooh, me likesies. It kinda gave me chills. Might work better as a short story than a poem, though, 'cause you have so many looooong lines.

[kilobites]

Yeah, it's true. I had to write it for poetry class, though, so I'm going to do my best to...you know, pretend it's a poem!