She's the one.

Dec 07, 2006 10:46

Title: She’s the one ( Read more... )

fic, juliet, jack

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femme_f December 7 2006, 10:11:03 UTC
[Juliet hated how Jack could get her to open up without even asking, she hated how she let the words fall from her mouth time after time. Slowly giving him pieces of her past to collect together.]

I loved this part.

Actually, loved the whole story. It's so true, it's Jacks turn to get rescued ;)

Very well written!

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kilpaddy07 December 7 2006, 10:16:43 UTC
Thanks im glad you liked it :)

First shot at a PG fic so wanted to go for emotional writing been writing to many smuts ;)

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silviur December 7 2006, 10:22:29 UTC
Juliet is a sensible cookie, isn't she :)
I loved the dorky present she gave him, that's so Juliet :)
Thanks Natalie.

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kilpaddy07 December 7 2006, 10:28:28 UTC
Thank Silviur, your welcome.
Im glad you liked it :)

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kilpaddy07 December 7 2006, 14:58:20 UTC
Thank you Helly, im pleased you thought it was realistic.Lets just hope Jack doesnt put his foot in it next time she comes back ;)

*returns hug for being a lovely bunny*

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purpleglitter1 December 7 2006, 15:12:11 UTC
Great job on this, Nat!:)

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kilpaddy07 December 8 2006, 09:44:47 UTC
Thank you, im glad you liked it :)

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xunderstatedx December 7 2006, 18:22:19 UTC
"
Juliet hated how Jack could get her to open up without even asking, she hated how she let the words fall from her mouth time after time."
I loved this line. It's so touching. And so true; it's how I want to feel about a guy.
"She was the one he had been waiting for all his life.<"
*Gushes* So beautiful!
Great job, babe.

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kilpaddy07 December 8 2006, 09:47:56 UTC
Emma *glomp*

Thanks babe im glad you liked it :)

Come and talk to me soon *shakesfist*

;) x

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xunderstatedx December 8 2006, 16:45:47 UTC
Darling! I'll start posting ok LF, k love? And I'll pm you tonight! *hugs*

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kilpaddy07 December 10 2006, 09:15:52 UTC
Hey babe havent been online until now so have replied to your PM at LF.

*hugs*

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