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kiltiebum

Five Hours to Broken Arrow

Feb 10, 2011 16:57

Title: Five Hours to Broken Arrow
Rating: R for language and gore.
Type: Gen H/C
Length: 1/?
Characters: Sam, Dean, Castiel, Bobby, others.
Summary: "I swear to God, I will hunt you down and I will kill you. That's what he said. That's what he said before he killed my brother..." Hurt!Dean Soul!Sam Covers seasons 1-6.
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caluk February 10 2011, 19:22:03 UTC

*flail*
That's a hell of a cliffie. What, is your middle name Kripke or something?
Poor boys. The desperation in Sam comes through so perfectly; he's clearly exhausted but still frantic to find his brother. And Dean, man oh man. Battered and broken - but I love the way you play him in this; not out-and-out defiant but still refusing to bow to Jeremy, stubborn to the end.
Looking forward to more...

kiltiebum February 10 2011, 19:32:33 UTC

Hehe. I wish I could write like Kripke. Glad you liked it. Thanks for the kind words.

rince1wind February 10 2011, 22:14:19 UTC

I hope you're not planning on waiting very long before posting the next bit!

nong_pradu February 10 2011, 22:36:02 UTC

This is a great start! I can't wait to see where you go with it! :)

So I wonder what's up with that family that papa Winchester iced them all (except Jeremy). Perhaps they're a family of monsters...? Or maybe John saw them as dangerous to his family in some way...? Can't wait to find out!

kiltiebum February 11 2011, 07:57:59 UTC

Thanks for the comments. Always appreciated. And, won't be long before Ch2 is up. x

jackfan2 February 11 2011, 22:55:47 UTC

Ok. I backtracked from the part 2 that I found posted to find this part so I could start at the beginning ( ... )