Smutty and tender, I love it! The build up in the first part of the letter is excellent, his writing starting out butter and miserable and then gets lost in his sexual fantasy. It contrasts well with the second part which is protective and loving. I like how he us comparing Rickon to the only other boy he has known well and finds even his writing superior. All those poor lemon cakes wasted?! Sansa will be heart broken!
I like how he us comparing Rickon to the only other boy he has known well and finds even his writing superior.
I think Joffrey and Tommen were both slow witted. Sansa remarked how Joff read with his lips moving. And Tommen and Bran were the same age, yet Bran quite competent and serious as the Lord of Winterfell at age 9 while Tommen wants to outlaw beets.
All those poor lemon cakes wasted?! Sansa will be heart broken! Ha! She's said for sure.
I have literally had to give myself a ten minute break between reading the chapter and writing this comment because I was so turned on, lol. I needed to calm down. Just, wow. **GRINNING MADLY** this is the best review I've gotten! It really made my week seeing it as this chapter was a PITA to write and I wasn't quite sure of its reception given its strange balance of humor, ranting, romanticism. I'm glad you found it hot! One of your earlier comments was about how would I make a letter smutty and hot, so tada here it is!
he's not afraid to admit that there are people who are born to be lower than others Yeah, Sandor's a classhole ("ugly peasants and their poxy children"). So is Sansa frankly. They are the product of their society which is hierarchical. I like fanfics that present them warts and all and don't try to modernize their morality. In some ways Sandor's a WIP but in other ways, I don't think he would even consider that his belief system is wrong.
I often forget about his burns and the effect they would have had upon him
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Another excellent chapter! It’s really getting better and better! I loved a lot of things about this one. Sandor has lost all reserves. Although - no - probably not completely now that I think about it. It did take him some time to warm up after all. Once he had though, oh boy
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I’m sure Sandor would find her squirming and complaining arousing too. A little resistance wouldn’t stop him… gods no… I think he would find the moment when he's penetrating her and she's a little dry so that his cock draws out the moisture with each successive thrust really hot. There's something very pleasurable about that friction for both parties. Smut writing never seems to address it for some reason.
It can get hard (in every sense of the word!) controlling feral beasts, especially one that’s been starving for five years, lol I'm glad you liked that line, it was one my favorites! Sandor's a smart guy, poetic even ("the three that died in the summer grass") I want to give him words that are worthy of him yet not my usual flowery style. I'm planning to go into the reasons behind his celibacy a little later. Its not as plain as just wanting Sansa. I hope you'll like it!
OK, Sandor tracing the shape of his cock behind his letter is immature, show-off… Haha! People are really loving that! I laughed like crazy writing it and
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'One commenter told me she could thought imagine RM doing it but not my Sandor (the bubug illustration). **SIGH** Sending a dick pic to your girlfriend is something young men do, not your dad! This story would really gross me out if it was RM.'
Show-Sandor is as flat as a bottle of coke left over a counter for a week. He has not an ounce of passion in him and could never write anything like that. Plus I really don’t want him to be perverse… so gross… :S
" Okay, the pisspot-like beer is probably not so nice to imagine, but it's vivid, it brings Sandor's everyday experiences to life, and it really made me smile
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well if sandor jerks off often enough he would have learned orgasm delay and be able control it to a great degree regardless of how hot sansa is. id imagine he would do that if he was expecting sexytimes anyhow as its so common with men before a hot date (so ive been told). i dont think he'd spill his speed so quickly given he's not a teenager having sex for the first time. lol, ive rambled a lot about this topic but suffice to say I think he has longevity in the sack
Now that there was some impressive smut in letter form :) I did love the little bits of Sansa's writing that were included, her very ladylike way of phrasing things ;) I love reading Sandor as the impassioned lover, so eager to be back with her, yearning and laying out all the things he'll do once he is in exquisite detail.
"Now that there was some impressive smut in letter form"
Thanks! I do believe that was the best smut I've written so far.
"I did love the little bits of Sansa's writing that were included, her very ladylike way of phrasing things"
Oh yes, Sansan stories where Sansa says 'fuck' strike me as deeply noncanonical. I was in a Christian relationship for 5 years and during it, I never even thought in curse words or even using "God" or "Jesus" in vain. I think Sansa is so deeply a lady, that her sexy thoughts are themselves couched in ladylike diction.
"laying out all the things he'll do once he is in exquisite detail." Sandor has quite the imagination. I remember a scene in the ASOS where he tells Arya that Robb's going to need him, make him a lordling, order him to kill Gregor. It was funny that it revealed how capable he was of self-delusion. And sad because it was the desperate hope of a desperate man. Him and Sansa aren't that far apart, though he'd get mad at me for saying so!
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The build up in the first part of the letter is excellent, his writing starting out butter and miserable and then gets lost in his sexual fantasy. It contrasts well with the second part which is protective and loving. I like how he us comparing Rickon to the only other boy he has known well and finds even his writing superior.
All those poor lemon cakes wasted?! Sansa will be heart broken!
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I think Joffrey and Tommen were both slow witted. Sansa remarked how Joff read with his lips moving. And Tommen and Bran were the same age, yet Bran quite competent and serious as the Lord of Winterfell at age 9 while Tommen wants to outlaw beets.
All those poor lemon cakes wasted?! Sansa will be heart broken!
Ha! She's said for sure.
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**GRINNING MADLY** this is the best review I've gotten! It really made my week seeing it as this chapter was a PITA to write and I wasn't quite sure of its reception given its strange balance of humor, ranting, romanticism. I'm glad you found it hot! One of your earlier comments was about how would I make a letter smutty and hot, so tada here it is!
he's not afraid to admit that there are people who are born to be lower than others
Yeah, Sandor's a classhole ("ugly peasants and their poxy children"). So is Sansa frankly. They are the product of their society which is hierarchical. I like fanfics that present them warts and all and don't try to modernize their morality. In some ways Sandor's a WIP but in other ways, I don't think he would even consider that his belief system is wrong.
I often forget about his burns and the effect they would have had upon him ( ... )
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O_O
This is great...
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I think he would find the moment when he's penetrating her and she's a little dry so that his cock draws out the moisture with each successive thrust really hot. There's something very pleasurable about that friction for both parties. Smut writing never seems to address it for some reason.
It can get hard (in every sense of the word!) controlling feral beasts, especially one that’s been starving for five years, lol
I'm glad you liked that line, it was one my favorites! Sandor's a smart guy, poetic even ("the three that died in the summer grass") I want to give him words that are worthy of him yet not my usual flowery style. I'm planning to go into the reasons behind his celibacy a little later. Its not as plain as just wanting Sansa. I hope you'll like it!
OK, Sandor tracing the shape of his cock behind his letter is immature, show-off… Haha! People are really loving that! I laughed like crazy writing it and ( ... )
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Show-Sandor is as flat as a bottle of coke left over a counter for a week. He has not an ounce of passion in him and could never write anything like that. Plus I really don’t want him to be perverse… so gross… :S
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Hahaha! I am not thirsty for that!
Um so what did you think about the fanart that was drawn for you for a Woman's Weapon? Execution it was very nice but the man was RM.
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Thanks! I do believe that was the best smut I've written so far.
"I did love the little bits of Sansa's writing that were included, her very ladylike way of phrasing things"
Oh yes, Sansan stories where Sansa says 'fuck' strike me as deeply noncanonical. I was in a Christian relationship for 5 years and during it, I never even thought in curse words or even using "God" or "Jesus" in vain. I think Sansa is so deeply a lady, that her sexy thoughts are themselves couched in ladylike diction.
"laying out all the things he'll do once he is in exquisite detail."
Sandor has quite the imagination. I remember a scene in the ASOS where he tells Arya that Robb's going to need him, make him a lordling, order him to kill Gregor. It was funny that it revealed how capable he was of self-delusion. And sad because it was the desperate hope of a desperate man. Him and Sansa aren't that far apart, though he'd get mad at me for saying so!
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