Marching Song, Part 7/?

Aug 22, 2014 14:32


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kimberlite8 August 26 2014, 04:45:01 UTC
"such tender love in it"

Yes I love that about it. It is very tender. I think Sansan can be tender given time. Sansa is a tender person to begin with and Sandor has a tremendous hungry for affection.

" Sandor calling her "my little flower""
Well that's in reference to the song he hears singing outside his tent - "Her little flower" The song is about the clitoris - flower is a euphemism for the clit and how it blossoms when you touch it right. Sandor likes to call Sansa "little cuntie" so its a reference to that.

"Keep up the fantastic work!"
Thank you maracuyakongeen! Its good to have you back in the bosom of fandom!

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kimberlite8 August 26 2014, 04:53:47 UTC
"a hint of a tease as she sends him a ribbon from her corset"

She's a bit saucy in canon I think. Like she gets titillated by the Westerosi bedding ceremony (well at least before her own marriage to Tyrion) and dreams of touching Loras' chest. She likes all that pillow talk with Randa. I think she's quite passionate but in a reserved way that manifest itself as teasing. I think Sandor for all his "tell me how you like to play in the dark" talk finds her teasing hotter. He's got a thing for proper ladies after all.

"I cannot wait until this is finished and we can see it in all it's glory. I'm practically counting down the weeks... :D"
Hopefully none of us will lose momentum. Its hard when I have to write it at the same time as the other things. But bubug's been so good to work with and I think I needed another project to stave off the boredom of unproductivity. :)

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maroucya August 26 2014, 23:05:17 UTC
I love the images Sandor biting Sansa’s ass bring to my mind. He’s a pervert - especially where she’s concerned - and it’s time people realise that he wouldn’t hesitate to put his face down there.

It’s nice to see that now that Sandor has sobered up, he’s a little less proud of having traced the width of his cock on the back of his previous letter. *chuckles* He did send it though and he wasn’t drunk anymore when he did so he’s not really regretting. Sansa’s own drawing is beautiful and although it’s a million, zillion even, times less crude than Sandor’s, it still has the potential to trigger many erections from Sandor… Boo hoo, how sad… (no sarcasm here)

I’m excited to learn the siege is coming to its end! I hope everything will go right for Sandor! And that we will get some sort of glimpse of their reunion? (I don’t know how you’d managed that but it’d be great!)

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kimberlite8 August 27 2014, 18:32:39 UTC
"and it’s time people realise that he wouldn’t hesitate to put his face down there ( ... )

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kimberlite8 August 27 2014, 21:44:17 UTC
"And that we will get some sort of glimpse of their reunion?"
A lot of commenters are asking for that. But I'd have to abandon the letter format which is what makes this story unique. I don't know what I'm going to do for an epilogue! I have a crazy idea but have to see if I can pull it off...

Well looks like my crazy idea is happening! The epilogue to marching song is going to be an animated sex scene! I sent bubug my concept idea and she was excited. That's right! Visual Sansan sex without Rory Mccann! Its only a few seconds of course. But I have a really sweetly erotic storyboard.

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maroucya August 29 2014, 18:04:49 UTC
Wow! This should be great! I can't wait to see them fuck! :D :D :D

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kitamere August 31 2014, 19:58:44 UTC
I can't find words for how happy I am, reading these last two chapters. AMAZING. Chapter 6 was the hottest one yet (and probably the BEST thing about coming home after my long absence is that I finally got to read it!) - and then, Chapter 7! Another piece of Sansa's letter, and I feel like I'm melting. Bubug's illustration for Sansa's drawing - and the ribbon. . .! Oh, my heart! Oh, Sandor's heart! The wonderful thing about the epistolary style is that, more than ever, I feel like I can feel what Sandor is feeling, and I understand how Sansa must feel reading his letters because - in a way - it feels as though he's writing to me, too. . . which, of course, I love ( ... )

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kimberlite8 September 2 2014, 01:19:19 UTC
Hooray! I was hoping to see your review ( ... )

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onborrowedwings September 24 2014, 04:26:03 UTC
I've said it before, but you do manage to perfectly capture that longng for the absent lover - the fervency of wishing and waiting. Seeing another letter from his little flower was also wonderful, Sansa knows just how much to reveal to make her man all hot and bothered and that corset ribbon was a masterstroke ;) and I love love love the illustration!

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kimberlite8 October 2 2014, 18:14:10 UTC
Sansa's very passionate too in my headcanon but always the proper lady. I imagine Sandor has a case of the squee when he reads her letter and sniffs that corset stay!

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