Like Fools: Chapter Two

[kimberry531]

Title: Like Fools
Author: Kimberry531/Clandestinelle (same person)
Rating: R
Pairing: Al/Scorpius
Word Count: 52,207 total; ~5k this chapter.
Summary: In the middle of his quest to find and master the Elder Wand which his father didn’t want, Al finds his family in the midst of a second Wizarding war. While in hiding, Al finds himself struggling to

Comments

[3ngel]

OMG!
Seriously... I can't talk about OOC or IC, cause I don't know how they're supposed to be, but that's exactly how I imagined them :D
And I looove Al's and Rosies little detective story xD And the owls... that was so cool xD
dammit, I can't wait so long for a new chapter, pleaaase be quicker <3 *puppy eyes*
I really love your story! *Sigh*

[kimberry531]

Thank you so much for your detailed reviews! I'm about to go put up Chapter Three now! =)

[josiehanamiopal]

It's really great, the Albus-Scorpius relationship is perfect! I'm happy you made Scorpius nicer and more mature than the early Draco. Also, yay Rose is a ravenclaw, not a Gryffindor! I'm a little disappointed that Harry didn't even tell Albus the significance of his name, and even Rose didn't know events that occurred only a single generation earlier. It makes sense that Harry wouldn't reveal the location of the wand to Albus, but he could at least mention Dumbledore's death, the reason, and Snape's death without mentioning that Draco got the wand after Dumbledore.

[kimberry531]

haha thank you! can't make it too easy for Al! then there'd be no story! =)

[lillianone]

Albus asking hrayy if he's on crack LOL

eager to see how things will go between AS/S and the Elder wand.

[kimberry531]

Keep reading! ;) I'm glad you're enjoying it!

[lily75160]

This is great so far. I love your characterizations, especially Harry's.

I'm impatient to continue this though, so off to your skyhawke archive I go!

Thanks for writing AS/S as well. It's hard to find really good, long stories involving them.

[kimberry531]

Haha you're welcome!