Coincidence, much? part 01

[kimcheesushi]

 This fanfic is about DBSK.. I didn't really come up with a title seeing how the story didn't develop much. But I've decided to post it up. After reading it the second time I actually thought I did a pretty good job (because my english grades are... :P). There is just no exciting part of the story. Just introduction the entire way. And it's long..

Comments

[jesc09]

hi!! i really enjoyed reading this! it has dbsk AND snsd (well, i'm just assuming yuna and seohyun are from snsd lol).. changmin seohyun.. aww.. maknaes.. ^_^

please update soon! ^_^

[kimcheesushi]

lol. thanks a lot.
i guess you can think of it as snsd. but actually i just chose the random name and cuz i don't know korean names i pick celebrity ones :P

but about updating...
so so so so so sorry.. *bows* the fic was intially what i wrote but i didn't think that the story could develop. it's too long already and there is.. no action :P

maybe one day i'll finish it but.. uh.. for now. i have no intention too. (thus the title unfinished fic01)

so so so so sorry. *bows again* XP

[miri91]

SPOT~ I GETS DIBS I'LL BE RIGHT BACK =D

YAHOOOO! a work in progress but i do like it i like it i like iiiiit~ =D

[miri91]

“Remember that song. The one that’s really upbeat that I made you listen to three days ago? The one with the guy speaking sort-of English at the beginning?”

“Yeah. I think it was… ‘O’, right?”
BAHAHAH, YC'S ENGRISH 8*D

“Hey, don’t you guys think the girl at the restaurant today was pretty?” Changmin randomly bursts in the midst of the silence. Well, as quiet as it can be with Yoochun snoring in the back.

AWWWW~~~ ;D the maknaes~ but maybe it would've been a lil more 'juicier' if there was more interaction btw cm and seohyun back at the restaurant...like cm constantly asking her to refill his glass, per say :D

“Hello. Yeah. I’m on my way to your house. No I’m not getting dressed up. It’s myeong-dong we’re talking about, not the prince’s birthday party. See ya in five minutes.”
lol like her attitude~ wish there was more of it! she's sassy in a good way ;D

“I think you forgot your brain in the midst of it all.
pahahahah *laughs behind hand*

“Yeah. You’re right. Let’s go to ‘Honey

Re: YAHOOOO! a work in progress but i do like it i like it i like iiiiit~ =D

[kimcheesushi]

LOL.
thanks for the suggestions. and i get the glass filling thingy. maybe she could've been like sorta pissed at him for being picky or sth :P

glad you like it though :]

Re: YAHOOOO! a work in progress but i do like it i like it i like iiiiit~ =D

[miri91]

^0~ yes, exactly! i can just see a pouting, angry seoyeon and a smirking cm kkk

good job! =D

[flyxtoxheaven]

Aww, have you ever thought of posting on O? it's better than some of the other ones of there [not being rude LOL] I'm pretty biased about stories... and writting ability -.- and actually having a decent storyline that's not about....
...

... Vampires or arranged marriages..

...I mean seriously?

Haha anywho you should~!

Oh btw, I'm going on a hiatus for Changminnie's story on O -.- I'm dying. [don't ask me why I'm telling you in comments haha i'm too lazy to load another broser.]

oh.. btw... ^_^ I like your stooorie :D

[kimcheesushi]

uh.. not really. it's unfinished. i personally don't like it when i'm in a middle of a story then the writer decides to stop writing :P *smacks myself*

lol. vampires went wild after twilight. i used to be a fangirl of patts. now thinking abt him grosses me out. when thinking abt it i never do realize or understand why he was so sparkly back then. maybe bcuz he played edward. :P idk. or maybe i got carried away in the hype. anyway.. now my standards are tons higher thanks to the boys :P

and aww.... i want to read abt sexy snarky couple. oh well. guess i'd just have to wait. i'm finally experiencing what it's like to be busy nowadays. so i don't go online as much. akh.

why thank you :]

[kimcheesushi]

lol. yesh. what fun would it be if they just left him be? :D