jealousy; bayoung, 1972 words, pg

Jan 03, 2012 23:19


Title: Jealousy
Pairing/Focus: Jinyoung/Baro, with a bit of Sandeul on the side.
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1972 words
Summary: B1A4’s type B bad boy doesn’t like sharing and is easily jealous.
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rating: pg, fandom: b1a4, pairing: jinyoung/baro

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sai12 January 13 2012, 08:57:34 UTC
Aww this was cute! I love how Baro got so jealous. Jinyoung's reaction was a little strange to me at first but I understand at the end! ^___^

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kimhalmae January 13 2012, 13:00:49 UTC
WAAAAH! ;A; TANKYEW FOR READING THIS CRAP! /bows down/ I didn't think anyone would want to read it, other than my friends. ;n; Your comment means a lot! ♥

I was hoping it would make sense at the end. xD But even so, I hoped Jinyoung didn't seem too much of a drama queen. LOL. Anyways. Thank you for reading and commenting! :D

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sai12 January 13 2012, 13:19:20 UTC
Aww darling this isn't crap! Don't say that!!

^___^ Keep writing!

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kimhalmae January 13 2012, 15:20:14 UTC
;~~~~; Thank you! ♥

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7daywar January 13 2012, 15:17:29 UTC
omo. this was really cute, i have a thing for jealousy stories and baro certainly looks like the jealous type! ^_^

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kimhalmae January 13 2012, 15:21:10 UTC
LOLOLOL. Yes! Sunwoo soooooo looks like the jealous type! ;n; So cute. /SOBSOB
I'D LET HIM BE JEALOUS OF ME. I MEAN, WHAT? :|

Thank you for your comment, lovely! It means a lot~ ♥

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mahjongghoney January 13 2012, 19:15:09 UTC
loved this. your jinyoung and sunwoo are wonderful, you just made me ship them hehe. i'll go read your other fics now, i hope you write more. :>

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kimhalmae January 13 2012, 22:54:16 UTC
WAAAAAAH. ;____; I MAKE YOU SHIP THEM?! THIS IS THE BEST COMPLIMENT I FEEL LIKE I CAN RECEIVE. MORE PEOPLE NEED TO LIKE BAYOUNG. SOBSOBSOB.

Thank you for your comment. Your comment is wonderful. ;____; This is how I see Jinyoung and Sunwoo in a way... and it's the reason why I like Bayoung, I think. :3 I imagine Jinyoung as the stereotypical type A guy and Sunwoo as the stereotypical type B guy... and it's such a cute match, in my opinion. ;w; I LOVE THEM. SOB.

Tankyew so much for your comment. It means a lot! :'D ♥

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judysaurus January 13 2012, 23:42:12 UTC
I forgot to comment on this story lmao

“Okay, here is the next question. If one of your members was a girl, which member would you date?”
“I think I would date Sandeul,” the leader spoke with a small chuckle"
ME TOO, JINYOUNG. MEEEE. TOOOOO. 8)

“Quit it,” Jinyoung commanded, wiggling slightly in his grasp in attempt to get out though the more he wiggled, the tighter Sunwoo held him."
WIGGLING LOL SO CUTE. BARO LE GUSTA, I BET HOHOHO

"Sunwoo glanced over at the clock; it had been around almost an hour since the leader was locked up in the bedroom doing lord knows what."
Well. Out of context, I could say A LOT OF THINGS about this sentence. But. I won't. Cuz. You know. I MEAN, WAT >3

"The blond said nothing as he buried his face against the back of Jinyoung’s shoulder, silently taking in his scent before heaving another sigh."
/creycreycrey ;~~;

Okay now write more cute stories with jealousy and kisses and scent smelling LOL ^0^

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kimhalmae January 14 2012, 02:07:08 UTC
LOL SCENT SMELLING LOLOLOLOL HAHAHAHA /DOESN'T KNOW WHY THAT'S SO FUNNY

And yes. I knew that sentence would give a lot of people the wrong idea, including myself. LOL. I was like, "Maybe I should take that out... NAH." xD Since I put that he was probably composing or writing lyrics like he usually did. But you're welcome to have your own thoughts about what Jinyoung might have been doing. B) /le wiggles brows

;~~~~; TANKYEW FOR ALWAYS COMMENTING JYUDEE U DA BEST SOB ♥

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judysaurus January 14 2012, 07:49:08 UTC
My own thoughts? They wouldnt make sense in the context of your story hurhuhur I mean w0t lolol

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countrymir January 14 2012, 06:23:08 UTC
aww, i'm still pretty new to pairings in this band but this one is a lovely little fic for that otp. lol i just like everyone with baro lol

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kimhalmae January 14 2012, 06:36:39 UTC
BAHAHAHAHAHA You're like me! 'Cept I ship everyone with Jinyoung. xD That's when you know who your bias is in that group: you ship them with everyone. LOL. IT'S TRUE. /NODS

I love this pairing so much and they're not as popular as other pairings which makes me sad... but at the same time, it's fun trying to convert people into Bayoung shippers, too! xD Like I said with another comment, I imagine Jinyoung as the stereotypical type A guy (kind of sweet, kind of a pushover) and Sunwoo as the stereotypical type B guy (kind of blunt and kind of devious) and they make such a cute match, in my personal opinion! :'3 Though I wouldn't mind Jinyoung being feisty every once in a while. xD

Anyways. I'm blabbing now. Thank you so much for your comment! It means a lot! :3 ♥

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judysaurus January 14 2012, 07:46:37 UTC
NOT TRUE. I SHIP EVERYONE WITH SHINWOO BUT HE'S ONLY MY SECOND BIAS >| /BUTTING IN LMAO

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kimhalmae January 14 2012, 08:02:23 UTC
WASN'T HE YOUR ORIGINAL BIAS?! LOL. SO TECHNICALLY IT'S RIGHT!

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