pitiful sunflower part 1; bayoung, 886 words, g

Jan 10, 2012 16:16


Title: Pitiful Sunflower, Part 1
Pairing/Focus: AU!Jinyoung/Baro
Rating: G
Word Count: 886 words
Summary: Past. Sunwoo’s side.
He just needed a little more time, was that so much to ask? )

fandom: b1a4, !au, rating: g, pairing: jinyoung/baro

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judysaurus January 12 2012, 04:27:42 UTC
“Quit touchin’ me! Grr-hrmkff-!!!”
I can totally see bb Baro doing that LOL idk, it's cute. Hm. Now let's try imagining older Baro say that. "QUIT TOUCHIN' ME THERE, HYUNG *fights off leader's hands*" I mean wat.

"Before he could rip it off, Jinyoung handed him a bag of bread to occupy his little hands; half of the bread that he didn’t finish during lunchtime."
omg aw idk, this was a really cute line ;;

"He remembers getting a good whooping that night."
WAHHHH BARO NOOO T_____T

"However, the stupid girl that threw sand at him, the day before, was there, stealing mean glares at him."
That girl's name was Ahreu, because she had a crush on Jinyoung and somehow knew she had no chance with him because Baro existed. Wat.

"A Big Bird backpack hanging down from his shoulders and all."
Omg flashback to that nasty performance where the coordi noonas dressed up Jinyoung as Big Bird :| And whatever material they had left over was obviously put into Sandeul's costume >____>

Okay. That's my commentary for this piece LOL

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kimhalmae January 12 2012, 14:00:43 UTC
HAHAHAHAHAHA OMG THAT SHOULD BE ME xD THE THOUGHT DIDN'T OCCUR TO ME BUT NOW THAT YOU MENTIONED IT, I PROBABLY THREW SAND AT HIM BECAUSE I HAD A CRUSH ON JINYOUNG HAHAHAHAHAHA /dies

And yush. Now that I think about it, I should have put Doraemon instead. xD But I was trying to think of something that would fit him at the top of my head and that Big Bird costume came to me so I just put it down. xD Besides, I think little!Jinyoung would have looked cuter in yellow since the color yellow represents kids better? I don't know. In my personal opinion. xD

Older!Baro saying, "QUIT TOUCHIN' ME THERE, HYUNG" HAHAHAHA It'll be the older!Baro doin' all the touchin' though... B) I MEAN, WAT. :|

WAAAAAH. ;___; TANKYEW FOR YOUR COMMENTARY, JYUDEE. ;n; I'LL PROBABLY START ADVERTISING MY STORIES AROUND TUMBLR SO MAYBE MORE PEOPLE WILL READ. SOB. I KNOW I'M NOT THE ONLY BAYOUNG SHIPPER OUT THERE. /CRIES

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judysaurus January 12 2012, 16:28:35 UTC
LMAO IT WOULD HAVE BEEN AN INTERESTING DETAIL. School girl Ahreu with a crush on school boy Jinyoung. So cute. ^3^

Big Bird fits because it reminds me of that performance LOL It's like, a tie in or something, idk. But Doraemon would have worked too.

LMAO OLDER BARO DOING ALL THE TOUCHING. TRUE LOL.
But idk, I can also picture a feisty Jinyoung 8) And Baro being like, NOT NOW I'M TIRED, HYUNG >|

You could post the fic in ok_b1a4.livejournal O: Lots of people go on that com and people would read it. There are a few bayoung shippers there, I think ^3^

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