[Fanfic] Indecisive - Chapter One

[kimmu_chan]

Title: Indecisive
Author: Kim.
Chapters: PREVIEW
Genre: Occassional Fluff, Romance, and Angst. We'll see won't we?
Rating: G - PG (only for mild language...so far anyway)
Main Characters: Hikaru & Keito
Fictional Main Character: Sakura
A/N: Okay, first chapter. Be brutal please! :3 Oh, and all the dialogues in italics are being spoken in Japanese. Just

Comments

[roxxilol]

ha ha HIKARU ha ha he's funny ^^ and Kawaii Keito and Sakura... sugee ^^

[kimmu_chan]

LOL It's persona-man's woo side showing! ><
Haha, and I think I made those two blush more times than I can count! (x
Teehee, thanks for reading & being ... Brutal? (x

[roxxilol]

oh ches my brutality hurts doesn it XP jk jk
well its okay that they blush so much i mean... they will eventually end up in LOOOVVVEEE wooo.. *chanting * ha ha okay okay im done

[kimmu_chan]

Yes, it really does hurt. It's killing me! (x
LOL *sigh* I have too many oddballs for friends. HAHA! JHEEZ. I was just kidding! (x

[kimmu_chan]

Haha, glad you're eager. ><
Thanks a bunch for reading! ^-^

[eemir_eera]

kyaaaa....hikato...^__^...

OMG..I'm so curious about the next plot...>.

[kimmu_chan]

Yay for Hikato! *claps* ^-^
Haha, hopefully once I get studying out of the way today, you won't have to be curious for long! (x
Thank you for reading & this motivating comment! >

[tokidoki_sama]

Haha...Hikaru's the doorknob...yet again...xD
Wow Keito...giving your phone number to someone you don't even know...how brave! I couldn't do that...XD

I really like this fic! I can't wait to read more! :)

[kimmu_chan]

LOL Yes, yes he is. It's okay though; He can work with it. ^-^
Haha, Keito's a brave brave man .... With muscles. (:<
I'm glad you liked it! Just as long as you don't go suicidal on me. I don't update as fast, so you might die sooner than you think! (x
Thanks for reading the brutal honesty! (:

:D

[kore_dake]

Sorry for the late comment. my younger bro was hogging the internet. -_-" (ignore my ranting)

ANYWAY!!
I love Hikaru's ringtone!! It's so WESTERN!! ahahahah and he's worried about communication..

Awwwh don't worry Hikaru-kun, there is no barrier once you talked to him.. Besides if all else fails, just tell him a joke you'll think of something.

>XP

Re: :D

[kimmu_chan]

LOL It's okay! I was studying part of the day today so it was hard to resist coming on. >< Haha, it's alright, sometimes we just have to let it out, and ranting helps. (x
HAHA, I know eh? Maybe JT will help him out with communication. >< And yeah, it's Hikaru, so anything's possible! ^-^

Thanks for reading & commenting! (: