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5 Times Hikaru Chose Keito Over Yabu

Aug 29, 2009 22:13

Title: 5 Times Hikaru Chose Keito Over Yabu
Author: Kim (Me)
Pairing(s): Hikato (Hikaru x Keito) Hikabu (Hikaru x Yabu) and hints of others. Pretty obvious. ><
Genre: Crack. FAILED crack.
A/N: GAIZ, be nice. I haven't written in, well, forever. My writing is probably only mediocre compared to a lot of people. So concrits are welcome, comments are ( Read more... )

type: hsjathon, member: group, pairing type: otp, pairing type: ot3

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kimmu_chan August 30 2009, 21:41:08 UTC

♥ LOL THANKYOU. Yes well, Yabu...well, I lab him very much so it should be okay? >DD
LOL "with cucumber" mhmm. >< WOW now you got your eyes set on YUTO?

Haha yes it did!

LMAO Nah, I don't think I've ever read him mentioning anything about Harry Potter, but I know I read Hikaru say something about it. But actually, I just used Harry Potter 'cause I'm a biased biznatch. >D

LOOL okay okay! Calm down...with Yuto... >D

LOL DON'T HIDE. THANK YOU FOR THAT. I need crits love ♥ SO CAN I HAVE KEITO BACK NAO!?

sakura10101 August 30 2009, 05:55:42 UTC

LOL
this is so not fail :D
I do feel a bit bad for Yabu though ><"
-goes and reads a Yabu centre fanfic to make the Yabu fangirl inside of her feel better xD-

kimmu_chan August 30 2009, 21:42:01 UTC

LOL d'aw fanks :3
SORRRRRRY, but SOMEone had to get the bad end in this whole thing. *cough* >D

kusanobabe05 August 30 2009, 08:08:49 UTC

OMG you're brilliant. I can totally see this.

kimmu_chan August 30 2009, 21:42:26 UTC

D'AW I'm glad you think so, haha it was quite fun to imagine while writing it ;p

roxxilol August 30 2009, 15:49:24 UTC

ha ha ha ha XP I love the "for the love of pancakes!" ha ha XP ^^ great job

kimmu_chan August 30 2009, 21:43:07 UTC

LMAO I srsly couldn't think of anything else, so I just stuck in "pancakes" 'cause I was craving panckaes? AM I SO WEIRD? Haha thankyou :D

candyapplegirls August 31 2009, 00:13:44 UTC

Your writing isn't mediocre! It's Mega awesome! ;DD~

Aww.. I love Keito and Yabu here. LOL. Keito the HP! fan. XD♥ Yabu the jealous hen. *shot*

Yabu muttering death threats from a small, dark corner.

LOL. Like he's calling the spirits to kill Keito's sense of style. Yes. I'm on crack today. XD

"FOR THE LOVE OF PANCAKES, SNAPE DON'T DO IT!"

OMG. Pancakes. ♥ XD So cute. I can just imagine our English Boy saying this. So cute. *glomps*

Wii. Nice fic. Super awesome. *o* *gives you Keitocookies*

kimmu_chan August 31 2009, 01:47:22 UTC

D'AW I'M GLAD YOU THINK SO. But I'm still pretty bleh ;p

LMAO It was pretty fun writing Keito as an HP lover >D and it was fun writing Yabu like that too ><

LOOOOL crack fic read by cracked fans? Nice mix haha. YES PANCAKES. I was craving some at the time ><

OMGSH *GRABS KEITOCOOKIES* SMANKS♥ >DDDD