Comments | kimonkey7: fic: the sharpness of the outline (5/9)

kimonkey7

fic: the sharpness of the outline (5/9)

Feb 16, 2010 21:22

Title: The Sharpness of the Outline
Author: kimonkey7
Rating: R - for strong language and content
Pairing: none (gen) Dean, Sam, John
Disclaimer: Not mine. Damn it.
SPOILERS: through 3X07

Summary: There are very few human beings who receive the truth, complete and staggering, by instant illumination. Most of them acquire it fragment by fragment, on a ( Read more... )

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Comments 7

iontas February 17 2010, 03:52:42 UTC

I am so excited that you have continued this!!!!!

kjfri February 17 2010, 04:19:32 UTC

Yippeee!!! SHARPNESS!!!!!

lemmypie February 17 2010, 12:34:09 UTC

Oh see this is to the point I remember! Now you are on a roll.
I've said it once I'll say it again. Just as good a read now as it was then.

shakespearebint February 17 2010, 16:27:52 UTC

still loving it

irismay42 February 17 2010, 19:00:12 UTC

You know that's probably the closest I've ever got to hating John Winchester in fan fiction - and I mean that as a compliment! Because you were showing us what was going on through Dean's eyes - the eyes of the one person in the world who probably loved John more than anyone else other than Mary - it made you realise just how much John hurt Dean by treating him in that offhand, dismissive way, and, in the later timeline, by not having trusted him with the truth.

Of course, we know John had his reasons, but that's not always a reasonable excuse.

A very compelling chapter. Great stuff!