Love's Not Time's Fool Part I Ch.4

[kinfic2]

Comments

[shadownyc]

I hope B/J finally get together and then someone (maybe Sophia) can bang their heads together to see if the two of them can gain some sense about their destiny.

Great chapter! Looking forward to more.

[kinfic2]

Thanks, C! I went through so many revisions on this chapter, I can't begin to say. Thanks so very much for reading and taking the time to leave a comment! It means a lot!

[pet0511]

I like what I see: Justin is not the uncomplicated part in this relationship. The way you are desribing him fits the late show-Justin very well: talking to himself and to Brian he does too little. The strong character with a big dose of stubbornness leads to himself myking a life in NYC, step by step, but taking care of his heart is another thing. Very good POV from his side. I can see that it's not easy to put Justin's inner demons to the outside without losing the subtety.
I go with Sofia: tomorrow aka the next chapter will be interesting...I hope Sofia will let us see it through her eyes...
:-)
Pet

[kinfic2]

Thanks, Pet! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[guavejuice]

You're such an amazing story teller my dear kin.
Thank you so much for a great chaprer. I had a slight grin on my face when I read that note.
I really hope they'll reunite eventually.
*hugs*
V.
p,s
I LOVE the way you encorporated Randy's pic in there ;) He's SO Justin in that pic *sigh*

[kinfic2]

Thanks, V! I'm glad you liked the chapter! And thanks for taking the time to leave a comment. I really appreciate it!

[koalared]

Good chapter. I like Justin's POV. Nice candid shot of *Justin*.

[kinfic2]

Thanks, hon! Nice to know people are still reading!

[later2nite]

I love how this story is developing. It's very realistic and could easily be a continuation of the show after 513.

Sophia is perfect - just what I'd expect for that role. You've created an awesome original character.

Anxiously awaiting the reunion of Brian and Justin. ♥

[kinfic2]

Thanks, Linda. *g* I like Sofia, too!