Love's Not Time's Fool P.II Ch.4

Apr 23, 2014 14:02

                   
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post 513, love's not time's fool

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shadownyc April 23 2014, 18:30:12 UTC
It's good to read B/J's thoughts. I hope this means they're finally heading in the right direction.

Still love this fic!

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kinwad April 24 2014, 12:29:55 UTC
Thanks, Shadow! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and thrilled that you're sticking w/this!

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bksbracelet April 23 2014, 21:27:47 UTC
Wow that was wonderful two point of views so insightful talking about each other and looking at themselves

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kinwad April 24 2014, 12:30:29 UTC
*g* Oh, thanks so much, Chris! I love getting into their heads! Thanks so much for reading, hon!

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pet0511 April 24 2014, 04:54:22 UTC
I always like to be in their heads, particularly in Brian's. He had some "astonishing" insights. Now what we still need is some spoons of trust and some of self-confidence...
But Justin isn't out of any criticism. He said it himself: Brian has to learn to talk. Well, Justin, you too - you have to learn to ask, ask more, express your own thoughts and feelings and not just escape difficult situations by walking away and blaming Brian.
I hope we'll see them making another attempt to clear the air very soon!!!
Thanks for sharing and now here it comes: is the banner at the start of this page new? I'm not the one who regularly notices such visual changes, so maybe the banner is here since I am but when I saw this post last night I doublechecked if this is really your place...
Hugs, my dear!
Pet

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kinwad April 24 2014, 12:43:01 UTC
Writing post-513 Brian (and Justin) can be tricky. We can only extrapolate what they'll do, how they'll act from what we've canonically seen in seasons 1-5.(*g* Including trying to make sense and understand their radical changes of behavior in season 5). I would hope that a post-513 Brian wouldn't have stayed static in Neverland and would have allowed himself the freedom to grow up.

*g* I used the banner for a little while a few years ago and decided to resurrect it. So it's kind of new.

Thanks so much, Pet for your lovely comment and for taking the time to let me me know!
*hugs*

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kinfic2 April 24 2014, 23:38:04 UTC
Oh, thanks, hon!As I said in another comment, post 513 can be tricky to write because there HAS to be change in both of them, yet they have to stay true to canon. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Thanks so very much for letting me know!

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rulisteningbj April 24 2014, 17:09:52 UTC
Loved their POV but it appears they are moving onto the same page. Hopefully! I so love this fic.

Dee Dee

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kinfic2 April 24 2014, 23:39:50 UTC
"it appears they are moving onto the same page." *g* As you said, hopefully! I'm so happy you're enjoying it, Dee Dee! Thank you for not only reading but also taking the time to leave a comment. I really appreciate it. Hope you're doing well, my dear.

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