[Fic] Numb (Mukuro/Hibari) 4/4

[king_oz]

Title: Numb (4/4)
Rating: R
Warnings: "If you two won't behave, I'm going to have to separate you." (Hibari and Mukuro and everything they entail), "Oh, shit! DUCK!!" (flying puke), "You better not piss her off, it's that time of the month." (Chrome with something resembling a backbone), "Hibari is not going to be happy..." (Ken), "Step away from the

Comments

[danybel]

this was simply fantastic! I found your post in the KHR!Comm as I was to close everything and go to sleep and I simply couldn't turn my eyes away.
I love how you describe the actions and how amazingly in character you kept everyone. Also liked how creative your story is, I mean, Hibari being Mukuro's babysitter? awesome.
Loved it!

[king_oz]

Thanks! I appreciate the feedback. I actually requested a very similar prompt in round 2, so it's been kicking around in my head for a while.

[asael]

I'm glad I finally had the time to sit down and read all of this. It was so fantastic! There's nothing better than a nice, long, well-written fic about my favorite OTP. ♥ I really like your Hibari, he's very IC, and I loved his occasional patience with Mukuro.

This was great to read, I definitely hope you write more for these two.

[king_oz]

Thank you so much!! They're my OTP too.

I plan on claiming more prompts for these two next round. :D

[ch1ps0h0y]

Argh. Only two comments? This cannot be - it should have more popularity than that!

I think I'm in too much awe after finishing this to be very coherent. Suffice to say, it's fics like these which both inspire me to write better and also to wonder why on Earth I try. XD" I love this so much. <3

And on that note, I really must finish my own prompt from KHRfest. Oops.

[therainshark]

Ah, I absolutely loved this. Both your Mukuro and Hibari were very in character, and I felt that you captured their relationship perfectly.

Adding this one to my memories~ <3