Fic: "Crossroads" (Light, Hope, 7)

Jan 02, 2007 16:21

“I’m leaving, Axel.”

Axel strode briskly down the hall, heeled boots hitting the floor with an uncharacteristically sharp staccato, dark eyes staring resolutely ahead. He ignored the speculative looks of the Nobodies he passed, not interested in their petty backbiting today.

“XIII is gone. Zexion and Lexaeus are still in pursuit but we may have ( Read more... )

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dilly_spandle March 21 2007, 19:16:35 UTC
I like this a lot. Axel is very...Axel-ish, and the last line is especially perfect. 3: Poor guy.

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cleflink March 22 2007, 02:05:45 UTC
*grin* Thanks so much! Axel's voice is an interesting mix between 'don't care' and 'nothing is every easy' that is really neat to write so I'm glad you liked it.
And canon makes me sniffle too. *sends Roxas to go give Axel hugs* I need to write some happy-ending AUs instead.

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masakomoonshade March 22 2007, 00:37:46 UTC
This is love. From Masako. Absolutely. That last line was fantastic, the entire thing was just gloriously perfect.

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cleflink March 22 2007, 02:09:44 UTC
Yay! *basks in the love* This thing practically wrote itself off that prompt, so I'm glad people like it.
And it's nice to see people visiting this comm again (and with cookies!) Reminds me that I need to get to work on my next prompt *loves on Axel* Thanks for the comment!

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