Invective DX

[kingyohime]

Customers

Customers, customers

Go away!

Come again another day…

Like when I’m not working.

With your silly requests

and your inane complaints,

you drive me up a wall.

Don’t come griping to me

when your tuna

doesn’t ring what you

think it should;

That’s your fault.

Buy some glasses,

Read the signs.

I assure you

it’s not

Comments

[cheatedplastic]

Oooer. I really enjoyed that. It made me want to start singing. Hee.

Anyway, I just wanted to say that I felt "I see you stalking across the floor," the stalking just...didn't feel right. I think there might be a better word for there, although I'm not sure what it is. *scurries for a thesaurus*

Skulking was the first thing I thought of initially to replace it. It's what I initially read. (Thesaurus not loading.)

Good luck, my love!

[little_baldwin]

Lawlz.