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[kinky_dragon]

Well, I had planed to use this time off to write some fanfic, but instead have been reading it rather than writting it. I figured I should write at least one story before I go back to school

Comments

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[kleinmeli]

Really sweet :)

I can actually see the red bow in front of Ron's pyjama pants. o_O
Made me smile and that is something nice :)
Hope you are in a "fluffy" mood more often.

Cuteness

[sua_arcana]

LoL, so cute! i especially like: "Well, I can’t very well give him me, now can I… oh… OH!"

that's very good inlove!ron characterization, and i usually don't like Ron. who cares if it's past christmas. i freaked out my family last june by adding "merry christmas" to my list of appropriate general greetings. i think you're ok, it's only january.

Are you looking for a beta? because i know fiction alley has a beta type forum (or they did last time i checked) or if you want, i'd be willing.

Re: Cuteness

[kinky_dragon]

thanks, if i'm ever in need of a beta i'll keep your name in mind and check fiction ally.

[oneflewtoofar]

awww. I like fluff too.

[mojo_gasaraki]

I know i'm a *tad* late seeing how you posted this in Jan, but still, very cute and i loved Ron in this, i usually don't like Ron but he was just SO cute...All I want for Christmas is you? Well, I can’t very well give him me, now can I… oh… OH! That made me grin...i'm going to be grinning for awhile actually...thank you.

-Mojo.