Comments | kinky_fruit: Patrick/Greta

kinky_fruit

Patrick/Greta

Mar 02, 2009 23:08

Band: Fall Out Boy/ The Hush Sound
Pairing: Patrick/Greta
Rating: R
Summary: Backstage fun.
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: NOT MINE!

Prize for: pyraterose

( This way for fic... )

fall out boy, fic, the hush sound, patrick, greta

Comments 8

pyraterose March 3 2009, 05:15:54 UTC

HAWT.
I <3 you guys :)

kinky_fruit March 3 2009, 05:18:30 UTC

YAY!! :3 I'm glad you like it. I feel as if it were a fail. ><

-Fruiit-

xmexandxyoux March 3 2009, 14:00:16 UTC

*flails*
But a bit of concrit?

kinky_fruit March 3 2009, 23:11:26 UTC

Yeah sure, always. :3

xmexandxyoux March 4 2009, 03:05:43 UTC

This was good, but I think you did a lot of telling and not showing.
*shrinks*
I just also couldn't really picture Greta's personality to be accurate as your portrayal.
*cringes*

fruiit_the_bat March 4 2009, 16:03:11 UTC

*pets* Thanks and yeah I see that. D:

I tried. lol. And once again it was my first time writing Het and Greta so I think I was a little bit afraid. >< But, I'll try better next time.

Sorries.

And thanks for the crit! I'm always looking for it to become better. :3

-Fruiit-

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