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kioradragon

Chapter Three: Cold water and Waves.

May 03, 2008 20:36

Title: Skinned Knees and Broken Hearts
Author: KioraDragon
Paring: Brian/Zacky, Jimmy/Johnny, Matt/Val (there’s no het, I promise. But Val had to be there cause she’s just awesome!)
Rating: Pg-13 to NC-17
Summary: "Sometimes I wish I was a little kid again, skinned knees are easier to fix than broken hearts." - Anon
Disclaimer: This obviously did not ( Read more... )

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malefic_syrinx May 4 2008, 01:41:11 UTC

Adore isn't even the right word to use but its all I got.
I love it.

kioradragon May 4 2008, 07:31:06 UTC

YAY! I'm really happy that you love it! More is on the way.

haggardjax May 4 2008, 02:01:31 UTC

I am so stalking you.
*hides in bushes*

well... this fic anyways. Can you tell that I have nothing else to do with my life? lol

This chapter is just as cute as the other two.
I am completely intrigued by this!
Intrigued I tell you!

kioradragon May 4 2008, 07:25:51 UTC

oh no! *covers up with a blanket*

lol I'm glad you think that my story is stalker worthy. And there will be more soon, I promise! XD

pineme May 4 2008, 15:21:15 UTC

Awww... Frik. You didn't even wait for me to really read it first. *sad*

kioradragon May 5 2008, 04:30:57 UTC

I sent it to you two days before I posted it, not my fault. XP

mcluvin May 5 2008, 00:05:35 UTC

This is so adorable!
And surprisingly un-creepy...
You'd think it'd be creepy, but it's not...
Weird.
But I love it so much!
<333

kioradragon May 5 2008, 03:51:06 UTC

thanks. it wasn't written to be creepy, which is probably why it works lol.

I'm glad you love it!

mcluvin May 5 2008, 22:27:16 UTC

I DO.
I REALLY DO.
:D

BUT I WAS TALKING TO MY FRIENDS ABOUTIT THIS MORNING AND THEY WERE ALL "HE'S 4? AND SYN'S 26? THAT'S CREEPY"
BUT IT'S NOT...
I LUFFZ IT...

kioradragon May 6 2008, 20:42:38 UTC

*shrugs* I don't get how it's creepy. Maybe the think Brian's gonna turn into a pediphile (which he's not!)

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synysterharlot May 7 2008, 05:10:29 UTC

this is really a cute fic. I love how you have written the interaction between Brian and BabyZacky. And Brian throuwing water all over Jimmy, Johnny, and Matt for upsetting BabyZacky was just perfect. I can not wait to see more of this!

kioradragon May 7 2008, 05:20:46 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you like it. *whispers* if you check my lj you might find another chapter or two XD