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Chapter Eight: For you

Jul 06, 2008 23:55

Title: Skinned Knees and Broken Hearts
Author: KioraDragon
Paring: Brian/Zacky, Jimmy/Johnny, Matt/Val (there’s no het, I promise. But Val had to be there cause she’s just awesome!)
Rating: Pg-13 to NC-17
Summary: "Sometimes I wish I was a little kid again, skinned knees are easier to fix than broken hearts." - Anon
Disclaimer: This obviously did ( Read more... )

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Comments 61

roknrolpassion July 7 2008, 05:23:01 UTC

Awww poor little sick Zacky! So cute though!!! Especially the 'for you' while choking down cough medicine!!!

Funny how Bri's parents thought Zacky was their long lost grandson! LOL! That must've been one hell of a thing to try and explain.

Lastly I love the added 'sparkle' you could say, between Brian and Zacky. Yay!!! This was a great way to end a great weekend!!! :)

xxx

kioradragon July 7 2008, 18:13:23 UTC

XD Thanks, enjoy little Zacky's cuteness though nine is the last chapter with him in it.

Poor Brian got thrown for a huge loop. X3

Well I'm glad that you like it, but I will warn you it becomes a firework in the next chapter ;D

Thankyou I'm glad you liked it!

annabyss July 7 2008, 07:03:20 UTC

aw... poor zacky. I hope Brian can figure out what Jimmy meant. Love the chapter.

kioradragon July 7 2008, 18:14:59 UTC

He figures it out, well his brain tells him whats going on anyway. Thankyou! I'm glad you loved it.

greenpants59 July 7 2008, 07:54:30 UTC

Dude. When I'm a mom if my kid is exactly like Zack I will cry when he's sick. Seriously.

I cannot get over how adorable Zack is.
I could not stop laughing as I read the part where Brian was trying to explain Zack to his parents. :]

I hope Brian figures out that he loves and wants the 26 year old Zack, that'd be swell, even if Zack is still 4.

Lovely chapter!
Cheers!

kioradragon July 7 2008, 18:17:57 UTC

I know what you mean.

I just about awed the whole time I was writting him. XD
Yeah, poor Brian got thrown for a loop by his dad. :3

He does!!! Well his brain tells him, but he figures it out.

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

bullets_4_blood July 7 2008, 08:15:42 UTC

this story is made of WIN!!!

Anyway i totally had to come back on and say that i can't stop thinking about this story. I'm trying to do a social deviance assignment and i can only think about whats gonna happen next. upate soon Pleeeeeeaassseeeeee........<3

kioradragon July 7 2008, 18:19:57 UTC

XD thankyou!!!

I'm sorry to take you mind away form your assignment. *ducks head* But I promise that I will have chapter nine up as soon as it's typed and beta'd

angelxvengeance July 7 2008, 08:30:06 UTC

Awww Zacky said that he loves Syn...yeah I know he's only four when he said it but it's still adorable

I can't wait to read part 9 =]

kioradragon July 7 2008, 18:24:46 UTC

*grins* Maybe little Zacky can get a confession out of Syn to?... X3

Thankies and I'm glad that you liked it! XD

Nine will be up as soon as possible!