Chapter Eight: For you

Jul 06, 2008 23:55

Title: Skinned Knees and Broken Hearts
Author: KioraDragon
Paring: Brian/Zacky, Jimmy/Johnny, Matt/Val (there’s no het, I promise. But Val had to be there cause she’s just awesome!)
Rating: Pg-13 to NC-17
Summary: "Sometimes I wish I was a little kid again, skinned knees are easier to fix than broken hearts." - Anon
Disclaimer: This obviously did ( Read more... )

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mcrxfobxrja July 8 2008, 04:36:21 UTC
This is amazing!!! I love it!!

Great Chapter can't wait for more!

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kioradragon July 8 2008, 17:38:12 UTC
Thank you I'm really glad that you love it!
Thanks, more wi;; be up as soon as I get it back from my beta.

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dwellonxwrong July 8 2008, 07:01:44 UTC
AHHH.
This is toying with my minddddddddddddddd aiueiuaherh.
I love it. =]
DOES ZACKY GO BACK TO BEING 26!?
OOOOOHHHHH PLEASE.

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kioradragon July 8 2008, 17:43:15 UTC
XD Well as long as you love it, I'll keep toying with your mind.
Yes, Zacky returns to his proper age, I promise.
Thank you.

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londonclockwork July 8 2008, 07:56:32 UTC
All right, I must say- I adore..this story so much. I'm always waiting for the next chapter and I'm sosososo interested in what's going down and what will go down. You're such a fantastic writer! Nothing is too dragged out, you're actually going at the perfect pace. People always rush into things and it's just dreadful. But with you, it's like perfect. It didn't take slow to get into, happened right off the bat. And now things are progressing. Everyone is played out so authentically too, I believe. That's another thing I adore. It's not JUST them that exist. It's everyone. Zacky is adorable, and I don't even LIKE little kids. Mind you, it's not because it's ZVbaby! but still. And Brian? Just wonderful. I'm so excited for the new chapter. I just wish you'd update faster :]

Please don't stop writing this story, I'm totally into it.

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kioradragon July 9 2008, 17:28:34 UTC
Thank you, I really am glad that you like it. I try to update it as fast as I possibly can. I try not to drag it out, I've read some stories with good plot lines and then the writter just rambles on instead of progressing the story. So I try not to do that with mine. XD Well I'm glad you think everyone is in character. I did the best I could, so thanks. I shall try to get nine up sometime before friday night.

Have no fear! I have no intention of abandoning it :3

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santoryu July 8 2008, 19:19:12 UTC
I... love this story. Little Zacky being sick was just too aww-worthy. ^^

You're an amazing author, can't wait for more!!!

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kioradragon July 9 2008, 17:31:51 UTC
Thank you! I felt so horrible though, making a four year old sick just for my twisted purposes. X3

Thankies, I shall try to get the next chapter up very soon!

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drmcfeelgood July 9 2008, 17:09:38 UTC
love this story. random but i work at play place for kids and i had a little boy last week that looked EXACTLY like your description of Zacky. He was adorable.

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kioradragon July 9 2008, 17:37:13 UTC
XD yay, I'm glad you love it!
And random is a great word for half the things that go through my mind.
Awwwww! Maybe he'll grow up to be a famous guitarist to... X3

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