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kioradragon

Nine Days Eighteen Hours and Four Minutes

May 11, 2009 23:15

Nine Days Eighteen Hours and Four Minutes

It's soft flesh and skin warmed metal when you press your lips to mine. Warm and gentle; I suck lightly on your tongue as you enter my mouth. Your finger tips are soft and calloused, depending on what hand touches me. But both drive me wild. You drive me wild. Always.

You make me gasp and ( Read more... )

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Comments 22

xxrevenge666xx May 12 2009, 04:00:01 UTC

So you have no idea how tempted I am to quote this whole damn story into a comment, hah. Really, that was one of the sweetest/most erotic stories I've ever read. I love how you managed to make them completely tender with each other, but at the same time a little bit dirty. It's a tough thing to balance out and you did it perfectly :) Fantastic job.

Your eyes are closed, cheeks flushed, lips parted and swollen. Your hair is a mess of black on the white hotel sheets and it takes my breath away. You take my breath away.

You turned my world up. side. down. when I first met you.

You stole my being and made me love you.

And I couldn't be any more thankful or happy.

I place a chaste kiss on the side of your mouth and smile at your contented sigh. "I love you." I whisper, just loud enough for you to hear it.

"Love you." You mouth back at me.
N'awww ^_^ Adorable.

oleanderbat May 12 2009, 04:15:40 UTC

this was almost painfully sweet and tender, the way you framed the whole love scene was...well i have no words for it. an amazing fic. Thank you for sharing!

kioradragon May 14 2009, 00:33:20 UTC

Yep it's slam packed with fluffy goodness. Thanks, I'm glad that you love it.

kioradragon May 14 2009, 00:25:20 UTC

Thanks, I'm so glad that you liked it.
I've seen a lot of stories that have sex but no meaning. I wanted something that other people could 'feel'.

thursdaywench May 12 2009, 04:32:40 UTC

adorable!
i was really angry before reading this, and it helped calm me down, so thanks.

kioradragon May 14 2009, 00:42:22 UTC

Yay for helping you calm down! I'm happy that you liked it.

sevenfoldbaby May 12 2009, 05:45:23 UTC

OMG, that was really good, I loved it, you are very good at writing stories with such meaning, and emotion,and hitting everyone one is your readers...

greenpants59 May 12 2009, 06:10:00 UTC

My my this was all so lovely! ^_~

This is the best type of sex, with heaps of teasing and a very hot ending to it all. :]

And as a huge fan of these two the sweet stuff at the very end was an added bonus.

Wonderful job with this!!!
Cheers!

kioradragon May 14 2009, 00:48:33 UTC

Thankies.

I agree, and sadly I don't think there are enough stories with teasing and playful sex.

They are just so adorable together! It's really not hard to write them into a sweet/sexy relationship.

I'm glad that you liked it.

kioradragon May 14 2009, 00:45:54 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad that you loved it and that it had meaning and emotion for you.

christinalp May 12 2009, 07:43:58 UTC

damn, that was a wonderful mix of sexy and sweet!

kioradragon May 14 2009, 00:48:59 UTC

Thank ya! I'm glad that you liked it.

josafiend May 12 2009, 08:26:07 UTC

I read this just after I woke up and I swear it gave me the biggest fluff induced head-rush. I love when scenes like this seemingly go on forever...

Absoultely perfect, and wonderful, and gorgeous... and all manner of other words which describe something so perfect.

You're great!

kioradragon May 14 2009, 01:03:35 UTC

XD yay for fluff! I'm so happy that you loved it.

Thankies.