Some typos here and there, a "be" missing somewhere where time is mentioned, but otherwise~
OH MY GOD. Masterpiece.
:DDDDDD
I love the long sentences, the verbs one after the other; it creates a sense of anxiety, much like the state the two boys are in. It's actually more than what I expected (fluffy stuff, tbh) but this is sooooooooo much better. ^_^ the Gokudera POV is mostly sustained, which is something to think about (why did you pick him over Tsuna?)... I do like Gokudera better as well. He's so... interesting. ;)
Looking forward to more plot bunnies... Text me anytime and άι γουίλ προβάιντ (ai gouil provaint) [uhh, Marios's outtake in an old podcast... it's like an inside joke between the podcasters... the funny thing is he's like me, whatever you ask of him he'll always find you a solution or an idea... dunno where he gets all these ideas honestly] Sorry for the off-topic thingy ^ :P
8D I did check, but I guess it didn't notice. I don't have word to check my spelling all the time! LOL. Lame excuse, I know.
You think so? :O I'm not one to write masterpieces. ^^; Weeeee~ Thank you for your lovely comment. I really didn't think that there would be any fluff in any of Gokudera's relationships. XD The Gokudera POV isn't just because I like him better than Tsuna. I just felt more comfortable seeing things from his point of view. I guess I relate to him more than Tsuna. Well, as much as one can relate to Mr. 59 that is. :) He is interesting! He is brilliant! I utterly love Gokudera's character.
Happy that you like the outcome of your plotbunny. I didn't have time to work on the new one yet (CSI and the shoot distracted me), but I wrote about half of it. It's coming along. I just got podcast 13, so I shall listen tonight! :D D00D, you NEED TO WATCH GUNDAM 00 (and Geass). AAAAHHHH. My brain melts.
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OH MY GOD.
Masterpiece.
:DDDDDD
I love the long sentences, the verbs one after the other; it creates a sense of anxiety, much like the state the two boys are in. It's actually more than what I expected (fluffy stuff, tbh) but this is sooooooooo much better. ^_^ the Gokudera POV is mostly sustained, which is something to think about (why did you pick him over Tsuna?)... I do like Gokudera better as well. He's so... interesting. ;)
Looking forward to more plot bunnies... Text me anytime and άι γουίλ προβάιντ (ai gouil provaint) [uhh, Marios's outtake in an old podcast... it's like an inside joke between the podcasters... the funny thing is he's like me, whatever you ask of him he'll always find you a solution or an idea... dunno where he gets all these ideas honestly]
Sorry for the off-topic thingy ^ :P
Anyway, awesome fic ^^ :D Keep writing!
PS: LOL bunny joke *points at icon*
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You think so? :O I'm not one to write masterpieces. ^^;
Weeeee~ Thank you for your lovely comment. I really didn't think that there would be any fluff in any of Gokudera's relationships. XD The Gokudera POV isn't just because I like him better than Tsuna. I just felt more comfortable seeing things from his point of view. I guess I relate to him more than Tsuna. Well, as much as one can relate to Mr. 59 that is. :) He is interesting! He is brilliant! I utterly love Gokudera's character.
Happy that you like the outcome of your plotbunny. I didn't have time to work on the new one yet (CSI and the shoot distracted me), but I wrote about half of it. It's coming along.
I just got podcast 13, so I shall listen tonight! :D D00D, you NEED TO WATCH GUNDAM 00 (and Geass). AAAAHHHH. My brain melts.
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