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Our Own Brand of Paradise - Chapter 6 Part D

Oct 06, 2010 12:33

Title: Our Own Brand of Paradise
Pairings: YunJae, YooSu, YooSuMin
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Smut, slight violence, Junsu pwning, fluff
A/N: I FINISHED CHAPTER 6!!!! :D Yunjae ♥ And some twists and turns. Nice :)
Summary: JaeChunSu are busy in LA. Yunho and Changmin are busy preparing for the SMTown concerts among other things. A phone call from ( Read more... )

Comments 13

rainycakes October 6 2010, 23:28:52 UTC

Hohoho I stare, all right. And Jaejoong isn't too old for me. *leers* >;D

...ok, so that may have sounded a bit creepy. *awkward cough*

Sooo...sweet chappie, ne? hehe ^^ Actually, it made me feel like reading the whole thing all together, to get the full effect...but then I remembered everything that occurred in the epicness that was chapter 6 and I decided it was too much of a crazy ride to go through all at once! loll
And Yunjae, ugh~ I love your Yunjae so much. They are so comfortable with eachother like a couple in an established relationship, yet so damn hawt together like they just met! Sizzle~ And I lurves it so much! :)

Good job, bb. :) Can't wait for the next one~

kirakiraayumi October 7 2010, 20:11:55 UTC

Lucky! :P That's okay. There's a lot of good looking guys here so... but none of them are as pretty as Jaejoong. XD

...we should stop being creepy, huh? lol

THAT WOULD BE INSANE. I wonder if it even connects well? XD

Thank you~! I actually love my Yunjae too, if that isn't weird... there's something that makes them easy to write. Their smut is kind of hard to write though, because they aren't super kinky like my Yoosu(min). XP I'm so glad you love them~~~ ♥♥♥

i'll try to hurry. But I don't want to end it.......

sekushidesune October 6 2010, 23:43:28 UTC

TT~TT SOOOO GOOOD. I'm on a time crunch so I can't leave my usual epi commet but I'll come back later and tell you everything that is running through my head right now okaay!!!!!

<3 for the epic ness of this chapter

kirakiraayumi October 7 2010, 20:12:36 UTC

EPICOMMENT!♥ I'm looking forward to it~! Take your time~ ♥

(I'm glad you ♥'d it! ♥♥♥♥♥)

ichigojae October 7 2010, 00:28:33 UTC

ah finally an update. What is up with that manager.. sigh.. you should totally torture him before you kill him :P

kirakiraayumi October 7 2010, 20:13:10 UTC

I have a feeling he won't mess with them again. :P

...at least not in this story. If there's a sequel. Maybe. We'll see. :D

bexy31 October 7 2010, 01:04:52 UTC

Oh my God I can't believe the manager followed them!! >.< That's so horrible and creepy :( Go Junsu, knocking him out! ^_^ Super!Su~ XD

The smut was really hot XDD

It's so sad that Yunho and Changmin have to leave the next day :((( I hope they can all get together again soon :3

Looking forwards to the next chapter! ^w^

Hope you enjoy Korean Club! :D

Um, the link to Part C says Part D...

kirakiraayumi October 7 2010, 20:14:39 UTC

I KNOW RIGHT?! Super!Su~ XDDDDDD

Ah, thank you~ ♥

I know, right~ it's upsetting. D: I'll try to hurry with the next chapter :)

IT WAS AWESOME. Except I was so confuzzled.

(oh. XD I want to change it but I posted it EVERYWHERE. 0.0; Thanks so much for letting me know! ♥)

hitomi2oo7 October 9 2010, 16:45:32 UTC

I am scared of the morning now T^T
I wanna pama to be always together T^T