hmmm....im confused.

[kirbirdia]

hey all! if you want, here's my essay ((college essay assignment for writing with nemo)) and if you want i'd really like some suggestions on how i could make it better, it can't be too much longer, because i'm at the limit as it is, but any suggestions/comments/concerns/criticisms are WELCOME!!!!!! thanks all!!!!! i'll leave you with a random

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[legaleebrunette]

ahh that's SUCH a good essay, wow. if only i could write like that! i really like how you used that John Keats quote too..very nice. right now i can't really think of any suggestions, but my brain is kind of taken over by schoolwork; however, if i think of any, I will most def tell you. yay for being happy! <33