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RWBY fanfic start
Nov 02, 2014 21:20
(Do the intro later. Going straight to the good part. Fufu knows the plot anyway (
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fufuyurifan
November 3 2014, 02:38:37 UTC
This is pretty good! :D
Short but sweet, and it sets the scene and the tone for the rest of it.
No pressure, but I'm definitely looking forward to more. :3
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kirby163
November 3 2014, 02:50:56 UTC
I'm honestly not sure about how I wrote Weiss' bit here. I fretted over that second and third paragraph like Weiss frets over secrets. And I'm still not totally happy with it. X(
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Short but sweet, and it sets the scene and the tone for the rest of it.
No pressure, but I'm definitely looking forward to more. :3
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