On criticism and thoughts.

[kiretozhe]

It's been forever and a day since I've written anything and posted it here for your reading pleasure. It may be longer still before I write anything else to post up here. But I was inspired by a conversation I'm having with Louisa right now about criticism. Mostly we were talking about Angie's art which can be found over on pegasusartists along with other

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[dragonoflife]

For what my opinion is worth, I've usually pointed them out as best I could because 1) I know that, if *I* make a spelling or grammattical error, there's a good chance I'll miss it on a readthrough as my brain processes what I meant instead of what I said, and 2) some of the things I tell you aren't intuitivem e.g. our discussions on unanteceded pronouns.

[dragonoflife]

Despite my inherent internal perception of an ambivalent reception towards opining extemporaneously, I nevertheless feel obligated to opine thusly by stating that a general probability distribution of cosntructively critical retorts would reliably demonstrate a statistically significant frequency of identification and internally relevant location of errors of the previously defined nature with dual intent: firstly, I remain fully cognizant of the essential reality of the situation, namely that a prose author being inherently aware of his or her intended meaning results in a psychological adjustment of the interaction between the visual field, i.e. occipital lobe, and the lingustic field, i.e. temporal lobe, which results in the error being interpreted according to meaning rather than fact; and secondly, I am further cognizant of inherently unintuitive nuances of grammar which can be rewritten in more effective manners but are yet not entirely incorrect, e.g. unanteceded pronouns.

Stop using big words indeed. Heh.

[tigerphoenix]

Here, I'll use small ones!

Don't make me kick your ass!

[dragonoflife]

You will anyway.

Come on, my big brain is cool, admit it.